>>321097
Sure, why not.
> Story I
This part focuses on Siren alone in Gluttony. It showcases her daily life—stealing things that fall into Gluttony so that he doesn’t absorb their energy. This gives us the opportunity to explain why she has remained in Gluttony for over 70 years, fixing that stupid ass plot hole.
Show her creating bubbles of her friends, playing with them, and reminiscing. Include a few flashbacks to her time with Cinderella, Abe, Redshoe, and Hansel and Gretel to flesh out her character. This is also a great opportunity to emphasize how isolated she is and how close she is to giving up.
Story I ends with Mihara, Yuni,
and Mori being consumed by Gluttony. While this part may feel slow or uneventful to some anons, it is necessary to develop Siren’s character.
> Story II
Siren saves Mihara, Yuni,
and Mori , but in doing so, she makes a mistake, leading to her bubble being discovered by Gluttony’s core.
Story II focuses on everyone desperately trying to defend the bubble before realizing they can’t hold out forever and shifting to an escape plan instead. This is also a great opportunity to showcase Mihara’s new powers.
Siren and the others decide to use the same method she previously used to send her friends' bubbles outside through the breathing hole. However, she doesn’t know if a Nikke can survive that route, which explains why she hasn’t attempted to escape sooner—it’s simply too risky.
Story II ends with them successfully making it outside and fighting Gluttony to escape, using the same strategy she tried with Levi—but this time, they succeed.
Gluttony feels severely underutilized in my opinion. The guy can eat an ICBM, but a little bit of crystal is too much? Even though I like the idea of using the crystal to defeat him, it feels too soon to kill him off. Also, the whole concept of his different mouths doesn’t sit right with me.
> Hard mode
For Hard mode, you could either show Siren reuniting with Cinderella and Grave. Alternatively, you could end with Mihara contacting Jien to negotiate for more power, feeling inadequate after struggling to defend Siren’s bubble.
You could also choose not to reunite Siren with Cinderella, leaving Cinderella to believe that Siren is still trapped inside Gluttony, prompting her to go back to SKK to ask for his help in defeating Gluttony. You could even include Levi in the plan.
> Advising Siren
You can include the commander in Siren’s advice sessions, or at least make it a flashback where she receives advice from Abe. This would be a great opportunity to contrast her lonely present self with her more upbeat past self through a few sessions with Abe. That way, we can see whether she has changed over the past 70 years.
Anything would be better than having her go through 20 sessions of "Ohh ah, I’m so lonely," endlessly talking to herself like a schizo.
> Advising Mihara
No opinion on this one because I didn’t roll for Mihara, cuz she sucks.
Since Mihara doesn’t play a major role in the event, I would probably make her a standard 2% Missilis Nikke and save her overspec form for a later event—one that focuses more on her after she has her talk with Jien.
> Advising Mori
Just get rid of the constant self-pity and the ridiculous "Nobody cares about me" nonsense, SKK clearly does.