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Harper Hall of Pern Jump Intro
Welcome to Harper Hall, cradle of music, learning, and the living link between craft and dragonkind. Nestled within the mountain stronghold of Fort Hold, the Harper Hall is more than just a place of song, it is the heart of Pern’s culture, where knowledge is preserved, and artistry shapes the soul of the planet.
Here, your voice can change destinies, your songs can stir dragons, and your choices will echo across the Weyrs and Holds of Pern. This jump draws inspiration from Anne McCaffrey's "Harper Hall of Pern" trilogy, a rich companion to her legendary Dragonriders of Pern series. Across these tales (Dragonsong, Dragonsinger, and Dragondrums) we follow young musicians whose gifts and courage help shape a world bound by dragons, danger, and discovery.
Pern is a world situated in the Rukbat System, the third world to be exact and it shares its star with a vast but distant Oort cloud. Every 250 years the Red Star (A planetoid with a very eccentric orbit) passes through the Oort cloud and drags with it debri that rains down upon the world of Pern as it passes resulting in a 50 year long battle for survival by the people of pern against Thread, a mycorrhizoid spore that devours biological matter.
Luckily thread can be destroyed with fire, and as such the people of Pern have looked to the Dragon Riders to protect them during these long turns. This Jump, as stated above takes place in the section of time covered by the Harper Hall series of books, not too long after the flight of Lessa and Ramoth into the past to bring the weyrs of old to the present to fight thread once more. As the keepers of history and trachers of the young the harpers have long held an important and well respected role in Pernese society. Maybe you shall be one of them?
Each choice you make will carry the weight of Masterharpers’ wisdom and dragonwings overhead. The songs you write, the allegiances you form, and the courage you summon will shape the rhythm of Pern’s living history.
Will you find your voice or be silenced by tradition?
The next page is yours to turn, and to that goal you are being given this:
1000 CHOICE POINTS