Alright finally done
Frankly the best way I can describe this in a single word is "hollow"
The whole thing felt empty, from the cheap clapbaits(the one where Kama felt an urge to squash the rapeworms in particular was tonedeaf at best), the homework copying all over the place beyond the clap moments, the twists and turns, the new characters introduced to the final message that just says "eh, Alter Egos are fine with who they are (even if this story chapter didn't actually feature any of them until the literal last section) so they get a pass I guess", it all came off as hollow
Didn't do any good to endear me to Kama since she was just acting like she does after Ooku so in my eyes she did not change and didn't endear me to Sion either with her "aha I calculated you would say that" shtick every time she opened her mouth
Duryodhana was just Indian Jason but worse
Bhima was just okay, he was barely there really, all he did was remind me of Rodeaux from Gash Bell
The Masters that weren't Cerejeira were all just plot devices and Cerejeira was obnoxious with her pity party whenever she was on screen, same applies to the other servants bar the Mahabharata duo
Everyone had part of their intelligence removed as part of the Alter Egoification process I guess because good god the amount of overlooking and idiot ball holding was insane
The reliance on "tell don't show" and flashbacks was ridiculous
The dialogue that Elron had with her dead would-have-been-boyfriend was okay for how short it was
With all that said, it didn't reach the low lows this game has reached before but it's a bad-to-mediocre chapter and will end up forgotten once everything is done with, all it really did was compound on Alaya's Visa System which says class has Sakuraface = Pass; class has no Sakuraface = no pass