>>8316 It's just what Weiss does, granted my next story will probably go straight into lewds with it being Penny and Ruby >>8317 Fair

Story is done

Got inspired by a friend Caution: very greasy

Writing a lewd for Halloween, unfortunately for some it isn't about Ruby's birthday

>>8466 Writing is good either way. The more the merrier. Gotta double down myself. >>8393 Honestly this is pretty decently written prose. Definitely publishable material. Excluding the smut the plot and writing reminds me of racy paperback-lit from the 90s, back before Twilight and 50 Shades ruined the genre. As a side note here's one of your monkey-Korra

>>8480 I mean since there is so much time until Halloween I might do some more for it, and glad you like it, I was a little worried that the like... 7k word set up was a bit much. And Monkey Korra is hot

Well I couldn’t drop it completely so I ended up finishing the sequel to Let Us Be Your Poison recently. Dance in the Flames wasn’t as good as Poison but in some ways it was more fun to read since it was a lot less dark and heavy. Most of the conflict in Poison was character drama related, it was all internal and personal, and for most of the story there was a huge divide between the Whiterose and Bumbleby pairs and everyone had a ton of emotional baggage and personal issues to get through. The conflict in Flames is much more external and by the start of it the Team RWBY girls are all close to each other and are fully in the “ride or die” phase. So that’s nice. But the conflict in Flames falters and makes it less interesting than Poison because the villains suck. There’s no way to sugarcoat it. The conflict revolves around Ozpin, Ironwood and Glynda and they just suck as villains in the story. They’re complete cartoons, they’re incompetent, one-dimensional, they do things that make no sense, they’re not interesting or allowed to have anything redeeming or complex about them, the narrative is horribly biased against them in all facets. Ozpin and Ironwood are just stupid assholes and Glynda is completely crazy for no reason. It unfortunately makes Ruby less likable too because everyone is caught up in this selfish, petty, pointless, bullshit. The politics and philosophy of the story are the same as always, that hasn’t changed, so you’d know what to expect. The author is very passionate so I’ll give them that. They clearly care a lot about what they’re writing. The best part of the story was everything revolving around Winter. Nora was also good in this one. Still an interesting story, and surprisingly much more relaxed overall than Poison, but not as satisfying because of that. Poison’s ending was the culmination of so much insane character drama and the strained relationships between all four members of Team RWBY. Flames just couldn’t really match up to that. I don’t know why Ruby wears glasses in these stories and I can never picture her wearing them in my head.

>>8488 >88 Good luck. I've personally been trying to write more even as I feel vaguely dissociative. >7K set up is a bit much I mean if it was just smut maybe, but the set up makes it interesting and what makes it fun as literotica. >Monkey Korra is hot Would have probably made her character more interesting.

>>8538 >Good luck. I've personally been trying to write more even as I feel vaguely dissociative. That doesn't sound good, i've started a couple stories but I haven't finished any of them yet >the set up makes it interesting and what makes it fun as literotica Kinda yeah, you need to know who is in the lewd and such after all >made her character more interesting. Yes it would have,

>>6974 >>6986 >>7007 Found this pic rel, reminded me of this.

>>8543 It's just a mix of bad weather and exhaustion from work as well as a minor set back there throwing me off. >'ve started a couple stories but I haven't finished any of them yet Story of my writing career so far. I'm taking a technical writing course so I can supplement my income and get some writing discipline down. >you need to know who is in the lewd and such after all Yep. It's one of the traps of fanfiction; to assume a reader already knows the characters and world because of the original work. >Yes it would have Hell, you could even find a good excuse for it; spirit damage-bullshit from Season 2 as an explanation, have her get mutated as a punishment for her dad angering the spirits or something.

>>8544 Glad you liked the story >>8545 I'll likely post one within a few days >assume a reader already knows the characters and world I mean it does make sense, and while there should be some explanation it should mostly be carried by people knowing the general lore >you could even find a good excuse for it I always explain it like the avatar wan spirit jumping into you thing but it's her own fault instead of her dad, because while Korra is hot she's a dumb bitch

>>8547 >I'll likely post one within a few days No rush lad, been working on my own stuff. Recently wrote an epilogue to my Tock smut-fic (see the Fauner thread). >it does make sense, and while there should be some explanation it should mostly be carried by people knowing the general lore While true, I find it good practise to assume a reader is coming into the story knowing almost nothing. Assumption is the mother of fuck ups after all. >I always explain it like the avatar wan spirit jumping into you thing but it's her own fault instead of her dad, because while Korra is hot she's a dumb bitch While valid, I think having it be from her father would make it happen from the start, especially since her dad angered the spirits in his youth apparently which is what got him sent South.

>>8595 In order >No rush lad Not really in one, I've just been making some progress in a few of them >Assumption is the mother of fuck ups Yeah, while you would expect people to know about the fanfiction they're reading some people seem to just read them randomly > her dad angered the spirits in his youth I just want it to be Korra's fault because while she's hot she's a bitch

>>8596 >I've just been making some progress in a few of them Good to hear >I just want it to be Korra's fault because while she's hot she's a bitch Fair and true.

>>8598 Korra being hot is what excuses her general bitchyness to some extent

>>8599 >99 Checked and fair, though more like it sets her up for brat correction.

>>8664 >prehensile hand-feet This is hotter than it ought to be. As an aside an interesting potential faunus trait, dead useful too; could use several weapons like General Grievous.

>someone leaves a thoughtful review on my almost 10 yr old fanfic >guest account so I can thank them dammit Anyway, reading this fanfic about Qrow in the bloodborne universe, it's pretty fun. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14433709/1/Cutting-Threads

>>8963 I didn't know you wrote fics. TIK

Found this on literotica of all places: https://www.literotica.com/s/taming-the-kitty-rwby https://tags.literotica.com/rwby/ KnightShade with a side of DragonSlayer

>>6274 >>4050 >Grimm Choices Updated twice so far, both short chapters. Pretty decent though. I hope the author goes for Lancaster, rather than anything else.

>>6870 >>6876 I should have asked earlier, but what memes? Lemme see. >>4050 >My Abominable Monster Classmates Can't Be This Cute It updated after over a year last April but now it's frozen again. Pic rel.

I should be posting some rwby lewds tomorrow, so if you like futa rwby you should enjoy

I'm officially more than halfway done with my fanfic, it feels go to write fanfiction, in a different way to original fiction. I've written two actual original novels but the instant gratification of fanfiction when you post a new chapter is pretty special. The RWBY fanfic scene is also still pretty dang good. I was in the mlp scene for a good long while but over the last few years that fanfic scene became a shadow of a shadow of a shadow of its former self. RWBY still has a ton of great stuff coming out, I'm genuinely surprised.

>>9226 >>9226 Hopefully that includes my lewds

>>9223 Good to hear you're still active >>9226 RWBY is a fandom with a lot of good fanfics. Something I can't say about stories like DxD, where the fanfiction is 90% hot trash.

>>9228 I did mention I was working on several stories earlier in the thread

>>9228 I do feel kind of bad for how much I'm torturing Weiss in my story but it's fun to torture your favorite characters when you write.

>>9233 >33 Checked. Yeah that is a familiar feeling sometimes. Suffering builds character and all that. >>9229 Well yes, you just haven't posted (ITT) in two weeks so I was a bit worried.

>>9235 Well here's the first story of the day, I'll be posting two maybe three more later

>>9265 Nice >Special Glaze <Enabler >"Watching Ruby swallow it down, unknowingly consuming *her*, had fueled something dark in her that Yang hadn’t known she possessed. Every time Ruby eagerly asked for "Yang’s special glaze," every time those trusting eyes met hers, it stoked that fire." Fuck you really know how to build it up.

>>9273 Glad you think so, currently finishing the second one, meant to be done a long time ago but it is a holiday

>>9282 I apologize for not posting as promised, I ask for forgiveness.

>>9303 I bow

>>9303 >>9304 Your tribute of Amelias is accepted. Thou art forgiven