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Fanfictions Anonymous 06/16/2025 (Mon) 01:10:11 Id: 0a2c9e No. 3988
I'm surprised how we have like 10 different threads dedicated to OCs, Ships, specific characters, Scarletverse and yet, No thread dedicated entirely to Fanfictions. Let's fix that. Space to talk about the fanfic/smut/lemon you are writing, reading or that one oneshot that despite you read it like years ago, you still remember like you read it yesterday.
>>3988 I made like 1/3 of the threads, people need to make their own at this point, to which I mean good job taking initiative. Currently re-reading this because of a relative recent update. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14045606/1/Money-and-Cigarettes-on-the-Streets-of-Vale Jaune and Cardin are the main characters; they both got kicked from Beacon and now make their living as Private Detectives. It's pretty fun, with a balance of humor, seriousness and relative adherance to RWBY, so people aren't OOC.
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I thought the Autism thread was the dedicated space for this. Oh well. Here is a second iteration of historical backstory for Vacuo, and just what made my Act 1 antagonist think the way he does; (Non greentext form because reasons) --- Guns aren't biodegradable - and vehicles necessitate infrastructure and logistics. For the same reason as the owner of a house that wouldn't pass an inspection (and isn't worth it to renovate) hands it off to someone else and makes money at the same time, the majority of the unneeded warmachines ended up as scrap metal in the hands of tinpot warlords, after the Faunus Rights Revolution. Wouldn't you know, selling the problem resulted in a different kind of problem for somewhere else. As a result, some time ago one warlord had gotten far too influential for Vacuo to be comfortable with having as close to their population centers as he had been. They financed a group of militias to go ahead and take him down. If that sounds close to an army, then that's the point. I'm not writing a world that was stupid enough to completely disarm at the conclusion of the Great War. But, certain actors did see that as the world industrialized, history saw militarism and jingoism become a type of zealotry in its own right. The outcome of measures taken is that though there are exceptions there may be, the world in general isn't happy with the prospect of large amounts of men at arms taking territory. Despite the setting being one of the best arguments for a strong national military that I've ever seen. Don't worry, there aren't armies anymore. Just scads and scads of independent companies. Now, Vacuo is the kind of place with sandstorms so bad that gun optics and battery mountings would get shredded in quick order. The hatch of a missile silo, on the other hand, could be buffed and repaired rather easily. The militia force gets itself a ballistic missile commander. There are problems in quick order after then. To the tribes of the place in question, all of the equipment was a windfall. But just like how the people remember their old divides should foreign conquerors withdraw, so do the affairs of the tribes linger to the modern day. The militias sure put the hurt on the warlord's forces. That's what happens when you care about logistics more than 'just go raid when you need more'. It arrived at the point where the last holdout of the warlord was about to be blown to kingdom come! But, the commander of one of the units involved was a tribal, who was a blood-sworn enemy of the tribe of the missile commander. To be more precise, the said commander had utterly revoked all association with his tribe. And the other officer did not care about this. This was at the point where the other officer didn't feel the need to keep in communication with the command structure and communications channels of the militias. The missile commander launched the final missile strike... the missiles left their siloes right as the rival tribal officer ordered a push made to capture the warlord's last holdout. See, their mindset was that it would be just conquest and prize-taking like they would continue doing. That advancing troop was so, so thoughly *gone.* lmao After, the tribe of the snooty now-deceased officer invoked shit that got their neighbours involved - they ended up complaining publicly to the Vacuo Council. Now, these tribals aren't stupid - you have to be sharp to make it out there. They complained at exactly the time the kingdom's government felt like good relations with the independent rural population (the aforementioned tribes) was a good way to go. They looked for a scapegoat. Lo and behold, there was the missile commander. The fact that the dead officer had been technically AWOL didn't count for much in the court of public opinion. And this being post-war, when there were many people keen to prove their worth and a single black mark on your record meant that someone else looked more appealing?
[Expand Post] The result of all of that is, the antagonist of my story's first act grew up with his father - that exact missile commander - often and freely criticizing those who governed the kingdom. As times became yet harder for the kingdom, less and less reason in the eyes of the future warlord (that my MC will end up combatting) stood in order for him to believe that Vacuo would extend the protection of its law to him or his people.
Sounds good to me. Full disclosure, I only started reading RWBY fanfiction this year. And that kind of happened because I was reading a Naruto-RWBY crossover. But anyways, I've read a ton of RWBY fanfiction since starting already, I love fanfiction but my interest in it has been dying out over the past year or two, so getting into RWBY fanfiction has been really fun. I plan on making more detailed posts on a few other of my favorite fanfics I've read but for now I wanted to recommend a couple of the crossovers that I think are good. https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-song-of-weiss-and-fire.1149113/ A crossover with ASOIAF focusing primarily on Weiss who ends up the daughter of a Lannister of Lannisport. It's a good read, better written than the author's MHA/RWBY crossover at least. It's a fun fic, just slow, only now getting to where the books start. It unfortunately did something that annoyed me recently with Yang flat out taking Daenary's place instead of being a wholly original character like Weiss and Blake. And Ruby is also apparently the three-eyed Raven. but overall I'd recommend it. https://archiveofourown.org/works/61170331/chapters/156308563 Another crossover with ASOIAF. Quality of the writing and storytelling is better than A Song of Weiss and Fire but it's also pretty slow moving and while it's an entertaining read it's a little annoying how willfully obtuse the girls are about Joffrey's parentage. They're also way craftier than they should be, and Blake is basically a ninja, and they treat Littlefinger owning brothels as proof that he's evil which is kind of weird. https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/boldores-and-boomsticks-rwby-pokemon-crossover.627805/ A Pokemon crossover that I only recently started to read. It's fun so far and it's kept my attention but I don't have much else to say about it. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13486344/1/Far-From-Home The Naruto crossover I mentioned. It's okay, pretty fun, but it focuses more on Naruto and Sasuke than RWBY I would say and it gets really weird at the end. There were a couple MHA crossovers I had been reading but I got tired of them, Bakugo is just draining to read in general, and I didn't care for some of the plot points brought up. I also at one point years back was reading SAPR, the gigantic MLP/RWBY crossover fic, but gave up on that a long time ago.
I'll just drop the greentext I put up in the other thread here. Based on the idea that Jaune's Semblance was one upgrade away from becoming a Negima style Pactio. >There was no time. >Pyrrha’s mind worked overdrive as she tried to plot out her options. >Cinder Fall had the full Fall Maiden powers and was making her way to the top of Beacon Tower. >Her current assets were herself and her partner Jaune Arc. >He had his scroll with him and he was trying to contact Professor Goodwitch. >It was a solid strategy to call for reinforcements but the entire campus was chaos right now. >Even if a teacher was available to help, there was no guarantee she could arrive in a timely manner. >Every second that the Fall Maiden was free to do as she pleased at the tower was a second too long. >Quietly Pyrrha gauged Jaune’s abilities against the foe she planned to face. >She was truly proud of him, she had raised him from the ground up into a fine Huntsman-to-be. >Pyrrha Nikos was NOT going to let his story end here. “There’s no time… get to Vale and call for help.” >She could see the look of confusion on his face. >”...what are you going to do?” >Her gaze turned back toward the tower. >”No… No! Pyrrha, you can’t! You saw how powerful she is…!” >Pyrrha was well aware of what Cinder could do. >”Pyrrha, I won’t let you…!” >Sweet fool. >Swallowing down her nervousness, Pyrrha turned to Jaune and pulled him into a kiss. >Her hands caressed the sides of his face, while she quietly hoped this wouldn’t be for the last time. >Though, she knew that it might very well be. >After a moment of hesitation and shock, she felt his large hands gently wrap around her. >She relished this for a moment before starting to brace herself to shove him into the locker. >That’s when everything went white. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pnKr7lrxfFc --- “What’s that…?” >Ruby turned from the Grimm she’d just slaughtered as her eye caught something. >Off in the distance, a very clear and shimmering light coming from the base of Beacon Tower. >It shone brightly for a few moments, before fading from view. >”Is it some sort of signal?” >Weiss turned her gaze toward her team leader, the impromptu band of students following her lead. “We can’t rule it out… we still don’t have everyone accounted for.” >Clearing out all the Grimm and rogue robots was a fools’ errand, but they couldn’t leave anyone. --- >Cinder Fall couldn’t shake the sudden sinking feeling in her belly. >The sudden burst of light from far beneath wasn’t something she could explain off-hand. >Which, considering the amount of time and planning she put into her plan, was off-putting. >Every single variable had been manipulated to her favor, there shouldn’t BE any unknowns. >Still, the power of the Fall Maiden flowed through her body like a spreading fire.
[Expand Post]>And the loud roar of the Wyvern Grimm soaring around the tower was reassuring. >There should be no chance of her falling to whatever that light was. --- “Jaune… what is this…?” >Pyrrha Nikos was completely and utterly baffled by the sudden change she felt. >Any thought of shoving Jaune into the locker and sending him away was halted for a moment. >”I’m… not sure…?” >Jaune was still blushing from the kiss, but he was staring oddly at the card in his hand. >Upon it was an image of Pyrrha in tarnished green armor surrounded by spears and shields. >As Pyrrha looked at the card, it almost seemed like she was a one-woman… “...Phalanx.” >There was writing on the card, but Pyrrha couldn’t make out anything but her name and that word. >Then her gaze drifted downwards and she realized that her well maintained armor had been replaced. >She now wore much heavier, but tarnished green armor that matched the set on the card. >Normally she’d balk at the wear, but somehow she felt like this armor and weapons were powerful. >No… SHE felt more powerful, like she’d been supercharged by the kiss she’d had with Jaune. >The only thing she could compare it to was the failed transfer from the Fall Maiden… >But this felt… natural, right even. “Jaune… I think you unlocked your Semblance and this is part of it.” >Pyrrha paused, having to quickly reassess her combat potential with Jaune’s Semblance in play. >The biggest concern was that she didn’t know how far he could be before this power dimmed. >Tactically, she had to consider that this connection she felt had a maximum range. >And yet, she had previously considered her death to be a likely outcome against Cinder. >Now… now she felt like there was a realistic chance of victory. “Jaune… we’re going after Cinder.” >Already she could see him balking at the suggestion. “It feels like she’s had this all planned out, but your Semblance is something she can’t know.” >”Do… you really think it’ll make the difference?” “It’s our best chance, but I need you to promise me something.” >”Anything.” “I know you won’t like it, but I need you to stay behind me… this power I feel, it relies on you.” >”B-but…” “This is the best way you can support me right now.” >A slightly grim expression appeared on Pyrrha’s face. “But if I lose… you run. You are not a match for her alone.” >She could see him begin to open his mouth to object. “Promise me or I go alone.” >Jaune Arc’s face spoke of the conflict going on inside of him, but he finally answered. >”I promise.” “Jaune…” >Pyrrha reached up to caress his cheek once more. “Believe in our victory.” --- >The sight of the massive Wyvern grimm smashing into the tower immediately drew the eye. >Ruby Rose knew that she was running out of time. >Individually she and her team were capable of taking out any given grimm in their way. >But the grimm’s strength came from the size of their horde. >Even before the ruination of the tower, the signs of battle atop were clearly visible. >That the massive grimm had gotten involved had clearly indicated thing were escalating. >Still, they were managing to take ground but Ruby knew she couldn’t afford to take the stairs. >The glyphs lighting a pathway up the side of the tower showed a much quicker route. >Turning to Weiss, she gave her a nod of thanks before starting to dash her way up. --- >This was impossible. >They had compiled a comprehensive profile on Pyrrha Nikos and all of her abilities. >There was NOTHING about these strange abilities she’d pulled out of her ass. >Cinder felt her frustration rising as she stared down the redhead, then at the blonde. >Jaune Arc was a nobody who got lucky by being partnered to the Mistrali Champion. >She had genuinely been surprised that Pyrrha had bothered to bring him with her. >But Cinder was no fool, she immediately noted that Pyrrha kept him safe at all times. >The blonde had SOMETHING to do with this strange power Pyrrha had gained. >Countless spectral shield seemed to form a barrier in front of the champion. >Already several of her arrows stuck out of the shields from her attempts to find a gap. >A single arrow stuck out of Jaune’s shield from the one time she managed to take a shot. >Pyrrha wasn’t giving her another opportunity to try again. >As the battle progressed, it was clear that Pyrrha was learning her new powers on the fly. >However, Cinder herself had just gained the Fall Maiden powers and was doing the same. >At this point, she was throwing everything at them including the Wyvern grimm. >As long as she kept the pressure up, she could force a mistake from one of them. >Already having to account for both of them was starting to tax Pyrrha’s abilities. >Not in protecting herself, but rather in having to cover for anything Jaune couldn’t handle. >The sound of a new pair of boots meeting the ruined tower’s top made her scowl. >It was that insufferable brat Ruby Rose, sticking her nose into things again. >Cinder began to mentally calculate the situation. >With her new abilities, she could easily handle her and the rest of her team. >But from this point on, she could also imagine more capable reinforcements behind them. >And while she was taxing Pyrrha’s abilities, she was also expending her own energy, too. >Mentally, she tallied how many of her mission objectives she’d achieved. >The Fall Maiden’s power had been claimed in full. >Beacon Tower was in ruins, shutting down the CCT for the foreseeable future. >But before that, footage of Atlas soldiers attacking Vale had been transmitted world wide. >The sheer paranoia the existence of Ironwood’s toy would cause would undermine relations. >With the Wyvern grimm already setting up in the tower, it could handle anything. >Locating the Vault wasn’t strictly her job, it was simply a bonus. >She was NOT going to lose on the victory lap! >Cinder Fall made a note to memorize the faces of the three fools who challenged her. >Then the Wyvern roared it’s challenge to them as she made her escape.
>>4012 Good picks! >Boldores and Boomsticks That one is up there with Dust and Echoes. It's been pretty fun reading this through as it's dripped on out slowly. The Huntresses fighting alongside Pokemon was a strange concept to see - as it does imply humans defeating Pokemon, which shouldn't happen as it defeats the point of Pokemon - but Yang getting put through the wringer by Tapu Koko was acceptable. Also, sticking to two Pokemon apiece still raises the cast by eight. That one was a good call. >Far From Home Reading it right now! It's seemed right to me that the portrayal lean heavier towards NS than RWBY. Their world plainly has more filling it up than RWBY does - and for all that it went closer to DBZ than Ninja towards the end, it still expounded on more, has had more in motion, shown more happening and just simply isn't as empty. Within the first seven chapters of the fic, Naruto and Sasuke dismantled Cinder's infiltration, blended her and Amber's souls together and overall have been active. In the same span of time, aside from the adults, the RWBY cast have been doing normal teenage things and normal girl things respectively. That really, really well illustrates the disparity of the settings to me. And it gets across a point I keep trying to make about RWBY; as a narrative work, it's supposedly wide as a pond but everything about it can be condensed to bullet points on a list.
>>4014 Yeah RWBY's not the deepest of worlds but it works really well for crossovers.
Game of Hearts by I'mSoAwesome is a RWBY version of the Persona games. It's arguably the best written RWBY fic there is. The character development is great, the powers are incredible and the romance plot lines are intense, dramatic, and realistic. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13804221/1/A-Game-of-Hearts
>>4012 > was reading a Naruto-RWBY crossover Far From Home? I remember chatting with the author. Guy enjoyed his work but got a bit burnt out, which is why the ending is a bit rushed. Still a 8/10 IMO. >Bakugo is just draining to read in general It's fun to see him put in his place but otherwise yeah, it's tiresome. Any good MHA/RWBY fics you recc?
>>4023 Only read these two: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14024455/1/Schnee-Hero-or-Huntress This one is by the same guy writing A Song of Weiss and Fire. It's not as good as that, but it's pretty fun. The writing is just kind of... meh? I lost interest when he started adding characters from other worlds, even though they're pretty minor so far. I'll probably keep reading but haven't in a little while. https://archive.transformativeworks.org/works/51010330/chapters/128877136 And then this one, nothing wrong with this fic, I just got a little tired of MHA at this point I think and stopped reading about 5-6 chapters in. Just burn out I guess, I wanted to try other fics/crossovers.
>>4029 Thanks for the reccs. If you need any good Naruto ones (crossovers or not) I can send you some.
https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13420487/1/A-Rabbit-among-Wolves My all-time favourite. Jaume kills Adam in a cartoon dust-cloud and takes command of the Vale WF. https://archiveofourown.org/works/32286289?view_full_work=true Pure excellence, connecting the dots of Sienna's life. But the author has fallen off, politics rotted their brain. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13245191/1/Luck-Takes-a-Turn Top tier! That SUM'BITCH ARTHUR MORGAN gets taken to Remnant by Summer through a portal. Turns out time doesn't run true between the two planets https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13100201/1/Carry-Me-Home Damn good. Sienna seduces Winter in order to piss off Jacques. https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/crusader-rwby-worm.1011534/ Adam goes to the world of Worm when he dies. One of the best Adam fics out there! https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13876081/1/Hollow-People The peak of Adam fics. Angst aplenty! It keeps him on with the show as the gang head to Atlas. https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13324635/1/No-Compromise A damn good fic, in light of it being part of a challenge to write a hundred words every day. Connects the dots of Adam's life. https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/the-games-we-play-rwby-the-gamer-ryuugi-complete.351105/ The foundation stone of big-length RWBY fics. Completed and released before v3, iirc. This is a glimpse into the world that was - this incorporates everything Monty wanted the rest of them to understand, what with assigning them homework on anime. It's a whole trainload of AU now. https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/i-jaune-or-the-context-insensitive-semblance-rwby.672117/ One of the crackiest renditions of things ever. Heavy Disco Elysium inspiration, and plenty of worldbuilding sprinkled in. Author wrote all of it using voice-to-text.
>>4030 I'll take a Kakashi one if you have it in stock
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>>4032 Crossover or non? A good crossover fic (incomplete unfortunately) is Silver Haired Stranger https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13340531/1/Silver-Haired-Stranger A complete one crossing with Lord of the Rings is https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11713821/1/The-Grim-Traveler This one is also complete, where Kakashi absolute trolls the Tokyo Ghoul verse: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13496737/1/CCG-Public-Enemy-No-1
>>4033 These look great just from a glance at the opening pages. Much thanks, Rusty!
>>4036 You're welcome. I wasn't as big into non-crossover Kakashi-centric stuff. There's a couple good ones with RWBY that I read a while ago, including one where he trains Weiss, but I can't find it RN.
My top 4 list of Grimmified RWBY fics: 1) https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13191717/1/My-Abominable-Monster-Classmates-Can-t-Be-This-Cute The initial story prompt is basically Rosario Vampire, but it becomes something wildly different and pretty interesting, is still updating and very long. 2) https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13965520/1/Where-a-Heart-Once-Was This one really goes all out in going AU with the story and doesn't hold back at all in terms of both imaginative Grimm and the horrific nature of battle. It also doesn't play around with Grimmification like most fics, so it's not just a 'humanoid grimm' but a monsterous grimm, built on the twisted remains of a human killed by Salem (I won't spoil who). Unfortunately seems on permanent hiatus. I contacted the author who is still alive based on their presence on social media, but they never answered. 3) https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12778468/1/Jaune-s-Grimm-hand kinda has some aspects from the plot of Parasyte but with a well-meshed twist by making it Grimm related and impact the plot of the story, giving Jaune unexpected and unique abilities and problems. Seemingly abandoned unfortunately but still pretty long for what was written. 4) https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14110259/1/Grimm-Choices Grimmified Jaune fic, a rewrite of an older fic that is pretty solid IMO. Updated last a year ago unfortunately, but again plenty to read in it.
>>4031 >I, Jaune damn I remember reading this ages ago and thinking the author had dropped it since it hadn't been updated in months. Cool to find it started back up again AND finished
Something I've noticed is how few fanfics actually get Salem's character and goals right and treat her as a generic "Conquer the world" villain when that's not actually what she wants.
>>4348 I mean it's kinda difficult to get her motives right because they're not exactly clear. Like at one point she wanted to just die, but after her fight with Ozma it's possible that she wants to terminate Remnant and remake it in her image or who knows what, we don't actually know what her plan is besides the downfall of humanity, and the speculations Cinder, Ozpin and Tyrian have made.
Anyone have any good time-travel and looper fanfics that aren't yuri-shit or just edgelord garbage as an excuse to bash characters?
>>4348 >>4351 What ARE her motives? At this point I'm very confused about what her endgame really is besides "destroy all humans"
>>3990 >I thought the Autism thread was the dedicated space for this I think the autism thread is probably more like a world-building and OC thread first (including fanart) fanfiction being adjacent to that. This is more dedicated to posting or discussing specific fanfics or asking for reccs or whatever. TL;DR: Not all fanfics have OC, and not all OC is fanfics.
So guys, what do you think of Let Us Be Your Poison? U personally liked it, although Blake can go fuck herself.
>>5445 It's okay but a lot of OOC moments and edginess for the sake of edginess.
>>5445 I have a lot to say about that fic and I plan to do a big write up on it at some point. I equally loved and hated it, I was very invested but my god was it frustrating at times. The characters were pretty great and it had some really amazing moments at the end. And I have to give the author a point: for as annoyed as I was with the fic at times, I still cared enough about the characters to continue. It kept me engaged in a way not many fanfics have, whether they be RWBY, Pokemon, Naruto, or MLP. >Blake Yeah she was a fucking cancer though. Got a lot to say about her. Ruby and Weiss were definitely the standout leads for me and what the author did with Yang was really interesting too.
>>5445 Still reading thru it. It's started to become not particularly captivating in just their first (self assigned) mission! The pacing is wonky as hell - breezed through the first twenty chapters as they were just a flavoured retelling. Then my patience gets drained on the first chapter stepping out from the rails of canon. The sole antagonists so far have been a bunch of thugs who are Roman's old gang... said gang being in a country village far from Vale. I like that this AU has knowledge of Grimm suppressed, it's interesting. Ruby's taken as being too fixated on fairy stories and old legends because she's familiar with them. The one thing I can say for certain is that Oz has been written well, by virtue of being the only one who is impressed that Ruby could draw the connection between what others think is a monster attack and the knowledge of Grimm that has been suppressed from the public in this fic. That's another thing I like, the author knows how to tell things by leaving them out. Grimm are fairy stories for kids, so Weiss doesn't see anything amiss with saying Hunters and Huntresses exist for border security... not feeling the need to wonder just why would border security necessitate Aura, Semblances and combat training. The fic is a very well done series of what-ifs. This doesn't overcome the fact that every trait of the characters is overexaggerated in that American manner where you mistake impact for good presentation. The author coukd benefit from meditating on the words "The designer knows he has achieved perfection not when there is nothing left to add, but when there is nothing left to take away." But, I'm not sure they would manage to figure it out.
>>5445 Let me be more specific on Blake. She is an absolute bitch who is the personification of a redditor, except the weight part. She is moody, a hypocrite, a loser, a disgrace to the world, and someone who deserves nothing but the worst. I didn't even about her during the final battle because she just sucks as a character. When weiss was in the med-room after her and the rest of Rwby almost died, blake was apathetic about it and played the whole thing off like it's a silly little adventure. Like what a heartless being, but when it's ilia, she decides to go boo hoo about it. I don't care about that when one of your teammates almost FUCKING DIED. I think when it when to blake, the author had no idea how to write blake because it shows with her actions and lines, which sucked because she had so much potential in this fanfic, which unfortunatly failed in execution.
>>5539 I wonder if this characterization of Blake is intentional, like yeah she sucks, but is intentionally meant to suck; really emphasize how much of a cunt she is by dialing it up to 11.
>>5544 I think it is because the author seems to be genuinely all in on Faunus oppression, the commie stuff, and anti-fascism with the way they portray Atlas, Weiss's religion, and other stuff. That said, Blake was still responsible for two of my favorite scenes near the end of the fic and it was a little easier to warm up to her by then: The fight between her and Weiss and then her fight with Adam in the streets of Vale while the Grimm rampaged.
Ugh, I'm making an A03 account just to be able to comment on RWBY fanfiction. What an obnoxious website.
>>5939 ...? You can still comment on things as a guest, right?
>>5943 Strangely enough I did not notice this, I think it might have been broken when I was looking at it from my other computer. Oh well, might as well still do it later anyways.
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Been rereading Where a Heart Once Was (see >>4050 ) and goddamn I'm both enraptured and annoyed it's on permanent hiatus. I'd love to write my own version just to get it completed but honestly I don't know if I'm up to the task of writing an original yet similar fic of this caliber. >>5551 That's good. At least she's not all bad. Feels closer to her pre-V4 character.
>>4402 A REALLY good Jaune fic is Jaune Arc's Initiation https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14178091/1/Jaune-Arc-s-Initiation TL;DR: Jaune loops during initiation because it goes totally awry.
Been reading Silent Understanding and caught up recently: https://archive.transformativeworks.org/works/63910573/chapters/163916992 It's a good and pretty entertaining fic, for the most part, with some really fun and interesting stuff between Neo and Ruby (especially earlier on) and I got pretty invested in it. The relationship between Neo and Ruby has a lot of character development and exploration going on, and by relationship I don't mean anything sexual or romantic, it's just a weird sort of strange and disturbing friendship that develops between them even though Ruby knows it probably shouldn't. That said, Ruby herself becomes almost wholly unsympathetic and I find myself aggravated a lot by stuff that happens later and how negatively her team, friends, and everyone get treated and how she views and thinks about them. Her problems are basically entirely of her own making and she just lets Neo make her worse and worse before becoming completely selfish and hypocritical with almost no pushback. And no one really calls her out or is given the actual opportunity to. The few that could instead basically just become her enablers as well which makes it all the more aggravating. I feel way worse for Yang and the others than I do Ruby. At this point I kind of want Neo to die not because she's a bad character but because I think it would be interesting and want to see Ruby's reaction. I hate how negatively and ineffectual and clueless Yang and the others are treated. Ruby for so long in the fic has assumed the absolute worst about everything and everyone and intentional or not it's gotten annoying. A lot of my complaints have been addressed somewhat in recent chapters but other things have come up that have bothered me too, such as Penny's likely character direction. I don't have a problem with maybe a more selfish Ruby or a cynical Ruby but this Ruby is more like a cunt who embraces total selfishness without even trying to make Neo better or have anything meaningful to say about her own life choices and beliefs. Everything that made her first okay with what Neo did has been thrown out in hypocritical fashion and it makes me dislike her in the wrong sort of way. In Origin Story for example, Ruby has a complete mental breakdown but it's way more understandable, she has no support network, she had to do worse stuff, she was in a worse position, and you see everything just slowly drain her and change her and this was a Ruby who at the start of the story had never gone through anything extreme or bad yet. I really felt for that Ruby. Unlike this Ruby.
Idea Prompt for a paradoxical Time Travel fic: Jaune Aura Amps a Summer Maiden Ruby and when she tries to maximize her speed, she ends up going back in time. She arrive over a decade before she was born, stripped of her powers and without her weapon or anything else. Taking an alibi - Summer - she ends up in Vale and realizes Beacon's still standing and figures out the Time Travel part. Long story short, she IS her own mom. Kinda thought of this because of my analysis of Ruby's Semblance and Jaune's Aura Amp and combined it with old V9 theories about Ruby Ascending to become her own mom.
>>4050 Grimm Choices updated today. Having not touched in a while, I reread the whole thing leading up to the new chapter and found myself enjoying it all over again.
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Someone give me some good Sonic x RWBY fics.
>Arc for Every Season updated after 2 year hiatus Fucking YES https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14115393/58/An-Arc-for-every-season
>>6370 There are a big bunch of memes shitting on this one fic by name of Red Rose on Blue Wind. I've pieced together so far that Ozpin and Qrow are heavily, heavily beaten down by the author in the narration. By contrast, Shadow and Raven get favoured real heavy. What's your take?
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Ohohoho, finally there's a place to put all my crossover ideas! First of all, a Kemono Friends crossover. Seriously, how has nobody done this yet? The contrast between the Friends and Faunus would be so interesting! Secondly, I'm currently working on a Hololive crossover where HoloMYTH (sans Ame) get stranded in Remnant. Also, Calli finds out that the Brother Gods forget to leave someone in charge of Remnant's afterlife, so no souls have been able to get in since they left. Being the workaholic she is, she decides to step in and fix things with the help of Summer Rose's ghost. Finally, I'm also in the planning stage of a Universal Monsters AU. Ruby as the Victor Frankenstein expy, Yang as a werewolf, Weiss as a vampire, and Blake as a member of a secret monster hunter society.
>>6870 >Red Rose on Blue Wind NTA; I haven't read it fully, but from what I know the author didn't intend to bash the characters and it's merely a reflection of an unreliable narrator, where Sonic's group finds their secretive behavior suspicious. Shadow and Raven do get favored however, the latter being given a lot of slack and reasoning for her behaviour.
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>>6875 This sounds cool. It's kinda funny for the first one, because I was just thinking about Kemono Friends the other day relative to the Faunus. Amusing that I'm not the only one!
>>6875 >Secondly, I'm currently working on a Hololive crossover where HoloMYTH (sans Ame) get stranded in Remnant. Also, Calli finds out that the Brother Gods forget to leave someone in charge of Remnant's afterlife, so no souls have been able to get in since they left. Being the workaholic she is, she decides to step in and fix things with the help of Summer Rose's ghost. That sounds fun, there are hardly any good hololive fanfics out there too.
>feed fic into chatgpt >immediately picks up that its about RWBY (Impressive because it's mainly about side characters) >lays out each character's psychology and motivations within the story >pros and cons to how they were written >analyses story and points out inconsistencies >but also praises it to a sycophantic degree >understands themes my proofreader friends didn't even pick up on >tops it of with an offer to write a scene for me >ok >barfs out a scene in a single second >it's just bumass prose and internal monologues like it's a femtasy chicklit (and emdashes of course, who could forget) you should all try this lads, it's borderline hilarious if not useful. >>6875 Put amelia in, we need her. >Ruby as the Victor Frankenstein expy, Just to be clear, the monster or the scientist? Can't really see Ruby being either. Anyway, blake being van hellshing would be peak. >that image I actually wrote a short MH fic about a hunter and a palico going to remnant. Never went anywhere because I had no themes to work with that weren't retarded unfortunately. Speaking of hunters, I kinda wanna drop the gang into the Bloodborne world- but again I'm struggling to find a theme.
>>6893 I've been feeding chatgpt prompts and information about RWBY for months, mostly to generate goofy shit, but also to find fanfiction; due to enshittification it actually acts as a better google search engine than google often is at the moment.
>>6893 >Put amelia in, we need her. Amelia, Ollie, and Roboco are currently stranded in a Fallout 4 crossover that's connected to this story. >Just to be clear, the monster or the scientist? The mad scientist. She doesn't have a monster until she revives Pyrrha. Or Summer, I haven't decided yet.
>>6900 I vote Summer. Sounds like a lot of fun (writing wise).
>>6900 I hope you mean Amelia Bedilia
>>6900 >Amelia, Ollie, and Roboco are currently stranded in a Fallout 4 crossover that's connected to this story. OK share this now
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>>6908 Seconded
Just a blowjob thing about Blake and Weiss I made for someone, I also have written something about Penny and Neo I posted on another thread, and i'm writing something about Ruby being turned into a background characer,
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>>6961 Looks cool. >>6968 Well that was lewd. >something about Ruby being turned into a background characer What!?
>>6971 ... I think I kind of get it. >Ruby didn't fight Ironwood. Winter did, before the gang jumped him. >Ruby didn't defeat Cinder. Raven did. >Ruby didn't want to fight Cordovin. You could say she was dragged into it. >Ruby didn't come up with the plan to steal the airship. Jaune did. >Ruby didn't fight Clover, Robyn and Tyrian because she wasn't there to make a difference. Qrow did, retardedly. >Ruby didn't take instruction from Ironwood. Oscar did. >Ruby didn't fight Neo in Atlas. Maria did. Her being the focus in the Ever After for a while was a return to what should be the norm. Her only real connection to anything happening has been due to her being there. She had impact, but close to no agency or ability to sway the outcome of events, let alone deciding what will happen. Switching her place would have yielded another character making her speech to everyone across the world through the Amity link. Even v6 onwards had things gradually slip away from involving her, or impacting her. It's a mistake to do this to your show's mascot.
>>6971 >>6973 I mean it in a literal sense, she would become one of the black silhouette people from the early seasons with a BG Character becoming a "Protagonist" and gaining color
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>>6974 This is gonna be a long one, i'm like 2k words in and it's only about to start getting into the lewd
I remember strongly liking https://m.fanfiction.net/s/10449572/1/ Four Deadly Secrets, but it's also been a decade so I'm probably going to cringe at the grimderp now
>>6974 So does this mean that everyone would just sort of forget she exists or something? I can't even imagine the psychological damage she'd suffer if Yang forgot about her. It'd make her breakdown in Volume 9 look like a mild temper tantrum.
>>7003 Ehh kinda yeah, as for Ruby she's in a kinda half asleep state. Here's what I have so far if you wanna read it, as for the actual Psychological break I won't really focus too much on it to prevent the porn from just being pure angst
>>6036 This finished recently and I just finished it today. Very mixed feelings. The story was interesting and had a lot of interesting stuff going on with Ruby and Neo, but I can't deny the conclusion was disappointing to me and the latter half of the fic mostly made me feel miserable.
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Well, although I never intended to, I want to write a RWBY fic. I stopped writing fanfiction a couple years ago and am now writing actual novels, but all the brainworms I've gotten since starting to gorge myself on RWBY fanfiction since earlier this year have made me really want to write something and now I can't get the desire out of my heart. I've already written up a full plot synopsis, character and chapter treatments, chapter titles, themes, etc. I don't know if I will actually write it since I have actual original novels and stories to write but still. God damn it.
>>7144 Well I support you, i'm waiting for feeback from one guy before I finish my Background Character Ruby one
>>7144 Write it anyway, if you can make it work publish it, if not post the ideas on here and let others give it a go.
>>7007 Finished this yesterday, rushed it a little after finally being told what was wanted, might do a refined version later and or a sequel
>>7525 What are the major changes? Good to see someone else writing here too
>>7542 Mostly added the sex part of it and the ending
>>7543 >>7525 You chose the name Sylvia because of Konosuba didn't you.
>>7547 Half right, I chose a character who shared some traits with Ruby, even if it's only superficial ones like having red hair tips, a red outfit, and being a leader in some manner.
>>7551 I thought I was the only one to notice that similarity, heh. >>7144 Forgot to ask but do you have any published stories? Fanfiction or original?
>>7555 Well if she's taking Ruby's place she needs to make sense. Would be weird for Ruby to be replaced by like.... Frieren or something
>>7558 Frieren would be closer to Weiss I think >>7551 Huh, never noticed that
>>7560 Frieren would be more Weiss, or maybe Esdeath... Or anyone who's snooty, ice themed, or has white hair/outfits
>>7555 I used to write mlp fanfiction https://www.fimfiction.net/user/318439/MagicS And yes I am an actual author now too, but that's all published under my real name so no linking that lol. And also I am indeed going to write and publish this RWBY fanfic that I've already started on, probably in about a week or so.
Really cute RWBY superhero romance fic. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14249809/1/Auras-and-Alibis
>>7564 Super Hero's you say?


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