>>41142
Violet's speech in the 3rd panel ends in a comma instead of a period
>Don't be so hasty, Arven,
>>41151
Nemona's speech in the second panel is a bit strange
>I've already decided that I'm going to with you no matter what.
I think it should be either "I'm going to go with you no matter what" or "I'm going with you no matter what"
>>41161
Minor point in Nemona's speech in the first panel
>But here's the thing Letty... You're not in a position where you're forced to get your hand dirty anymore.
I think it should be plural, "hands" and not "hand"
>>41172
Roto-ji's speech in the final panel
>Prince, I shall lodgings rooms for four in Zapapico.
I think this should be "I shall book lodging rooms for four in Zapapico"
>>41190
In the first panel, you typed "Letter" instead of "Letty"
>You know, that magnanimity and broadmindedness you showed Letter...
>>41355
In the second panel
>You already learnt about Operation Star from Mera...
I think this is called "Operation Starfall" in the games, and I think her name is "Mela" in the English localization
Also, in the last panel
>Present Time, Tagtree Ticket
This should be "Tagtree Thicket"
>>41359
In the first panel on the first page
>The Tagtree Ticket, huh...
This should be "The Tagtree Thicket, huh..."
In the first panel on the second page, the word "with" is repeated twice. Also, the name of the Pokemon is "Grafaiai", not "Grifaiai"
>Those with more peculiar tastes sometimes buy and sell stones and trees with with patterns drawn on them by Shroodle and Grifaiai
>>41412
Minor point, but in the 4th panel, "Port Marinada" should be "Porto Marinada"