>>1123
Your script reminds me of a certain style of small-time video game reviewers from the early days, usually having a slideshow of images and video with little in the way of fluff, and the pacing and speech is fast and dry. I don't have examples of that at hand, unfortunately.
If that's what your aiming for, attempt to make sentences shorter, more curt and increase the amount of wit, but don't overdo it.
>(...) barrier and charge $100. I’m not even mentioning season passes, DLC, and micro-transactions tied to lootboxes. The simple fact is that video games are becoming a very expensive hobby. This has confused a lot of people and brings us to the simple question of Why is this happening?”
These sentences do not add any flavor or make better use of prose. They make it sound boring and without personality. What you could possibly do instead is:
<I’m not even mentioning season passess, DLC, and micro-transactions tied to lootboxes
>, and I haven't even gotten started with season passes, DLCs, microtransactions and the mandatory blood sacrifice rituals to YHWH they're mandating from February 2034
<The simple fact is that video games are becoming a very expensive hobby. This has confused a lot of people and brings us to the simple question of Why is this happening?”
>Simply put, videogames are luxury items now. It's a bizzare state of affairs. I'm sure most of you are baffled too, like how <insert very quick witty joke here referencing the general decay of standard of living in the first world>.
This isn't perfect, and you could probably improve the wording a lot more. I think its a function of how well read you are, whether you grew up around an English speaking community, and how many interesting people and life experiences you've have.
If you are aiming for something like what Ross (Accursed Farms) does in his narration, then this script could work with less changes, but it definitely could use some more trimming and less formality, like:
<Another factor people are pointing to is because of inflation.
>Another factor people point to is inflation.
or
>Something else that people bring up in this conversation is inflation.
This is all just my opinion, though. You decide where to take it.