It's not fun to read. An entire novel written that way — let's just say that if 'Getting Over It' was a book, it would be this. You don't need to show off in front of your readers, you simply have to be honest and convey your thoughts as clearly and as precisely as you can. But your text is borderline gibberish, and I stopped reading it around the third sentence, because unlike Bleak House, which is an example of dense, intricate prose, this exercise of yours felt entirely like wasting my time.