>>2259
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Her torso on the left looks a little too 70's anime. If that was your goal, good job. If not, try making the hips a little more pronounced, also the chest needs to be re-done. Right now it makes her tits look a little too 'mature' which is not right for a girl like cotton. What I mean by that in less words is, they look saggy. You should be able to make them look perky despite wearing the toga thing with the belt. I would recommend drawing more 'vagina bones' which can be done with the right shading in the pelvic region.
This is more evident with the drawing on the right, but the proportions are also off a bit. Her head is bigger than it should be, and her Lego-hands are slightly distracting. This is also a good chance to demonstrate your familiarity with thigh muscles on women by doing some proper shading there, unless you're gonna focus on the arms.
But I feel like an asshole only saying negative things, so here's what I think you did right. The face and expressions are well-done, especially on the right. The intensity of the movement is portrayed well without sacrificing Cotton's cuteness. I can tell you are probably most comfortable with that "45 degree" angle that she is posed in for both images, rather than having her facing the viewer/camera straight on (which I think would actually benefit a pose like the one on the right imho)
The chest looks a lot better on the right than on the left, and everything below the belt is well-proportioned, I don't know how Cotton's legs look in canon since she always has that dress on, but you might be able to get away with making her either thicker or skinnier. She's kind of in the middle right now.