To start off the discusion. Whad do you *e n t i t i e s* think about games that have vore but are mostly stuffing oriented? In my opinion, I really like seeing a pred starting from (relatively) small meals, slowly progressing to larger and larger meals until you reach at least several people's worth.

Can someone please share all of the bonus scenes? (Or as much as you can share) Thank you.

>>65908 I like it when women or female game characters start of as normal people but slowly degrade in hungry preds. What is also a turn on for me is when they it is wrong but they can't beat their predatory urges.(uncaring preds are also a W in opinion) I'm a f*cking freak i know that but i can't help it.

>>65912 How fast should do you preffer this progression? (Not in realtime but in the amount of content, as if should the story progress faster or slower?).

>>65940 *How fast do you preffer this progression? My english sucks.

>>65941 > preffer I believe you.

Does anyone got last version of this game?

65961>> Well, the newest version is public so you can just go here. https://forotherpurposes.itch.io/evoria

>>65940 Evoria could affort it to speed it up a bit since we are already 8 chapters in the story, so i would appriciate if we got more vore scenes in the future not just 3-4 vore belly scenes. I like a slow build up to the realisation that they are vore preds but once they come to terms with it they start treating people like food. (So slow build up> fast vore pred regression) And would i also just love it if they creators of the game would put more post-vore weight gain in future chapters.

>>65982 I like a slow build up for story but for side content I would say leave it fast tbh. It side content and it should be around like 30-45 mins long fun thing fron the story that around and hour or 2 long. Also agree some more post weight gain would be nice but I rather have it like the Brewmaster basement game where you can change the spirte weight that don't affect the story.

>>65912 This right here, I like this alot from the game too. This game does it way better than some bs did too. Also like how Renee is turning very much into "can we just eat them instead?" The Naomi having the emmie treatment but I'm glad it not esse pushing her but her own urges with Naomi.

>>66001 What game is it?

>>66004 Mario and Sonic at the Olympic Games, okay retard?

>>66004 No it's obviously Evoria.

>>66011 >>66012 Oh derp, I wasn't paying attention to what thread this was at the time of that message, presumed that it was the vore games thread. My bad, I often like to have multiple tabs open so I didn't notice for that reason

Does someone maybe have the Evoria bonus scenes? or bonus parts of the games? It's on kemono but you can't see the post.

>>66020 he has hidden them in the chat tab on patreon. kemono doesn't import that for as far as I know.

>>66054 Thank you for your comment, the reason why i asked is because some people know a website or methode to bypass the page. Yeah dw i just hope that someone will share the bonus stuff in here.

>>66055 >>65911 He used to just put a youtube or mega link on his patreon posts for the bonus scenes. Either he became aware of kemono or suspected that people were sharing the links and move it all to the chat tab. He also change the old links, if you click on the links now they just say video or file unavailable.

Since we are talking about bonus scenes, which tyNice person you prefer? Those that extend the current story. Or the ones that aren't canon but can be freely experimented on? I personally prefer a ratio of 1/3 between those two.

>>66129 *which type stupid autocorrect

>>66129 I have no idea what you mean by that but if you could you can share everything that you have. All the bonus scenes are good so i'm not picky.

>>66133 >could you can share everything that you have. Sorry, but I'm empty-handed. >I have no idea what you mean by that I mean that as a question of preference for the current and future state of the game. Let me rephrase that. For this game (or any other that is similar), would you rather have the side content (as in bonus scenes, branching paths, short stories...) be more focused on expanding the story: where we can see further character development, motives, values, etc.? Or would you rather have them focused on a 'what if?' situation? Even though they would not be directly connected to the main plot, they would be mostly focused on providing content for the player. In short, do you prefer the characters themselves, or do you just care about the eating part?

>>66136 Those scenes were one character eats characters in their "universe" seems pretty hot. I hope they all contain post-vore weight gain. Oh Lord that would be horny.

There gotta be someone that has community tabs pull man, kemono ain't doing it any more for this project pulls.

>>66554 as of this post forotherpurposes has less than 250 patreons. chances of anyone leaking it now is pretty slim. lewdlemage has over 1500 patreons but only one linked account on kemono. not saying that it's a guarantee that there will be leakers once the patreon subscribers reach a certain number. but it shows that the more subscribers you have the higher the likelihood someone will leak the content.

>>66809 If we only had someone that was willing to be a pirate for us. How about this: each month one of us anonymous users takes an L and pays for 1 month of content. (As much he or she can affort.) After that someone else will pay for the next month and this can potentially keep going on forever. Does that sound like a good idea or not? Because let's be honest the chance of this thread being kept alive if nobody is going this share something is pretty slim since we want content.

>>66812 I know by the way that my idea sounds retarded but if we all want content then this is probably the only way to do it and the cheapest.

So does someone have some exclusive scenes? Please bro someone has to have them T.T

Well they updated to 8.5 now

Since the game thread is archive now, anyone got a link for the new chapter for this game?

>>78807 Its out already?

>>78813 It's out on pateron

>>78817 Oh, I guess I just never noticed

>>78818 I'm guessing the only chapter left now is 10, which I presume is the final chapter

I’ve only played up to Chapter 5. But are there any Fatal digestion scenes with main characters?

>>65908 I think Some Bullshit was pretty fun. I like the writing. I don't like Evoria's writing as much

>>78851 Evoria does come off as more infantalize than some bullshit

>>78857 it really is something seeing the difference between naomi and emmie despite being basically just the same archetype. i couldn't really stand some naomi scenes, and the drama itself feels a bit... i dunno, a bit forced? i mean i get why naomi and renee would have had an argument during that chapter, and i can see what they're going but i think the execution was just rather terrible. it comes off like some babby-tier 'noo you did bad thing i can't forgive you!' and 'stealing from the evil fascist empire is bad you guise because... erhm... because it's still stealing and stealing is... le bad!'. it'd be hilarious if it wasn't so jarring.

>>78874 *babby-tier moralizing i just didn't like that plot point in particular. it's rather irksome. like, yeah, i get it, naomi is a pure girl who is naive and shit, but for some reason the thieves guild somehow doesn't have any ad-hoc justifications for stealing gold from le evil empire.

>>78876 Compare that to Pro trying his damnest to protect emmie while also looking for anyway to get rid of her demon. Sure there are comedic moments but when it get serious you know they mean it

Latest download in new thread: >>78903

>>78904 Thank you!

>>78876 >>78885 Feels like forotherpurposes is trying to emulate the writing to be something similar to Undertale. Unfortunately lacks the writing skill for it. Nerds1's writing looks like something you would find in a Saturday morning cartoon. Maybe because he figure that it's the best you are going to get for these types of games.

Does anyone have the Evoria bonus scenes… patreon chats can easily be dumNice personn kemono now

>>82392 Chats can be dumNice personn kemono… fuck I hate my fast typing

The story was never good by any means, but it really took a nosedive after they captured Mitzi. The train section is a mess of a mystery. You mean to tell me the "great detective" couldn't figure out that the only person she told about the poison took the poison? That was stupid. Then there's the whole courtroom part, which is completely ridiculous. You have to defend someone you know is guilty of the crime, which is a crazy choice to make. I like the vore in that part as much as the next guy, but the fact she tried killing a witness in the courthouse to prevent her from testifying should've been reason enough to have her hanged or whatever. Mitzi's whole redemption doesn't really work when she's been fucking hitler since her introduction, she's responsible for the deaths of who knows how many people, including Renee's friend. That's not something that you can erase with a few sad childhood flashbacks and pretend Mitzi is just part of the crew now. On that note, the modernites practically vanish from the story after Mitzi is captured. We get some scenes here and there but they lose all their presence. It's as if there's no antagonist anymore. >>78874 I think another important difference in the character writing between Evoria and SB is the fact every member of the party is clearly different from each other when it comes to eating. Emmie is a mindless glutton who'll eat just about anything, because she knows it'll have no consequence. Clara is extremely proud and tries to hide her gluttony as much as possible, and failing completely. Meanwhile Pro works as the straight man of the party that reacts to their antics. They are clearly different and bounce off each other well. Then you get to Evoria and they are all the same. Naomi, Renee and Mitzi are all Emmie. Once food is involved, whatever personality or character traits they previously had vanishes completely until the fetish scene ends and the story continues, and then they become characters again. The contrast is jarring every time it happens. They can't really bounce off each other in these scenes because they become the same character. Evoria in general is overindulgent. Every bite of food has to be followed with an exagerated burp, every time the women get fat they have to talk about how their tits and ass will get huge. Every time they think about eating someone they get all horny and weird about it. It is simply too much. This hurts the fetish scenes because it makes them feel samey and formulaic. Forotherpurposes has to learn that sometimes less is more. Build up the stuffing and vore scenes instead of just throwing everything all the time. When Cause of Concern came it, it made all these flaws in Evoria's writing (both in fetish and non-fetish scenes) so much clearer.

The best scenes in my opinion are the Lilith vore scene, because it was the first one, and her personality was a big contrast to what we'd gotten up to that point, and then the vore scene in the courtroom due to being such a shock. All the buildup of the story prior to that point indicated that either Naomi or Renee would be the first in the crew to actually eat a person whole (I'm not counting the scene of Renee eating Naomi cause it was just to save her from the cold), so when instead, all of the sudden, it turned out to be Mitzi, it was a huge surprise, and a damn good one.

Beside soom good criticism, has anyone have a mega for the extra stories at all? Cause kemono still hasn't updated that community part to show the links so it probably just better to have someone just make a mega or something to hold everything to download. Similar to the yourvorezone mega.

Also cause of concern and somebullshit are not good comparisons to this despite being the inspiration for this projects. Your probably better compare this to auxgaem2 than anything else. It doesn't help comparing it to that Titan of a project that blows away any vore game out of the water but that's what I get from evoria.

bellybea*s art is so deviantart tier. Could improve his art if he just make an honest attempt to study the fundamentals. His art have improved very little over the years. The only improvements seems to be shading, coloring and looking less "wonky". He doesn't strike me as someone who is unable to learn art fundamentals. His art despite looking bad, is kind of impressive given the detail and if draw from imagination. Clearly have some talent

>>82428 >The story was never good by any means, but it really took a nosedive after they captured Mitzi. Would had been okay if he had just keep the story simple. Your typical hero party defeats the demon lord type of story. Unfortunately tried to make his story "deep", can't really see how that can be pulled off successfully for these types of games.

>>82428 Criticanon, can you tell me more about what you think about Cause for Concern? Personally, at least in terms of characterizing a party full of gluttons (and one maneater), i think CfC is still leagues above Evoria, I do agree with you that a lot of the Evoria's main characters are basically all feel the same in how they express their piggishness, and also the fact that they all wish their tits and ass get bigger from that fact. It does feel samey and formulaic. It's like they're all blending together to become the same character with some minor quirks to differentiate each other. Plus, Renee and Mitzi being antagonistic with each other with Naomi in between, while it does make sense logic-wise, it is executed poorly. It feels annoying just to read their back and forth, at least in Chapter 8 where they really dialed it up. I can also see what the writer's doing with Mitzi's plot, but I think it's a bit trite. Plus, I don't think she actually does anything to make the party dynamic better. Lilith would have been a better fit than Mitzi partywise, and would have played better against Naomi than against Renee, whom I think is more of a central character to the story than Naomi is. Honestly, my favourite characters in Evoria would have been Lilith and Bea, unabashed voracious predators who just eat when they want, and they even approach it differently from each other. While Lilith still suffers from the same problems as what Renee and Naomi would eventually become, I think her being a self-centered narcissist worked better than Mitzi. Plus, I think Lilith being technically the first that leaned more into it in her chapters played off well with the other characters at the time. Mitzi could have been better as a side character like the others, like Bea. Also, I do agree, they did built up Mitzi to be a 'Literally Hitler' kind of character with how she worked narratively and character-wise. Though I do think they could have done it better, it does strike me wrong that the writer tried to write her this sad backstory especially when they already pulled that with Lilith. It feels somewhat generic too, with how it was an absolute sob story to the point that it borders on ridiculous. I see what they're trying to do, but I think there's much better ways to go about it if that's what they wanted to do, and I think it would have been more interesting if they turned her into someone like VD from the Shrink 'High games (maybe the Gakuen one, at least in how VD acted there), where she's a different character whom you occasionally clashed against while still also being on your side. I could have seen her trying to flee during the court case, actually have her break free from the grasp of the players while also fighting against the Modernites after she gets abandoned to actually build up her redemption arc, especially given that she literally killed Renee's mentor/mother figure. I can see what they're going with Renee basically denigrating her to the point that Mitzi just self-destructs, I like that part, but I think if they wanted to go that route, Mitzi and Renee should have been actively combative to reinforce the mutual hostility, and them actually splitting apart before the attempt at reconciliation (Mitzi not wanting to move and telling Renee to go fuck off and leave her alone), and even then, Renee seems suddenly lenient to Mitzi after Mitzi's breakdown and reconciliation. Renee should still be stewing in her hate and give her time to process that, because it feels too sudden and jarring when she suddenly accepted Mitzi, and Mitzi quickly recovering and being somewhat back to herself afterwards only hurt that part. It made her look like a child (in a bad way) and it also ruined the gravitas and depth of the scene. Renee should have split off from Mitzi at that time to solve the problem on her own, Mitzi brooding for a while until she then does something on her own to try and save Naomi since she's the only one that actually treated her nicely (but still viewed through a selfish lens, like getting one back at Renee, make herself feel less useless and prove Renee wrong, etc.), and eventually slowly working together with each other. That would have gone a lot better, as it wouldn't ignore the fact that Mitzi did genuine terrible things, and murdered Renee's mother figure and had fun with it. Overall, it's just a mess emotionally, the whole game. Naomi could have played more the corrupted innocent girl, becoming more driven by her naked hunger and voraciousness without talking about how she'd be a lot sexier with it (since it clashes with her original characterization) and slowly becoming more selfish and more self-driven, her no longer being 'innocent' but still keeping her genuine heart of gold core (so basically a good girl who occasionally lapses to her own hedonism and trying to find loopholes to indulge in it like an addict). Renee could keep her desire to be sexier and make her tits bigger through eating other people, it being a result of Naomi slowly twisting to indulge in its hedonism, but through the lens of how pleasurable it feels for her and how much hotter it makes her afterwards, specifically she eats because she finds it hot and makes her hotter. If they really have to make Mitzi a permanent part of the party, they could have differentiated her by characterizing her voracity as her feeling powerful and having control, as her doing it because it makes her body hotter doesn't really follow from her previous characterization, it should have leaned more on her being a power-tripping power-hungry bitch, absolutely loving how powerful it makes her feel, how much control she has over her prey, literal life and death at the palm of her hands etc. And them becoming more voracious could have been more explicitly been Naomi corrupting them. And even with all that, they would have still kept the story as is. As I've said earlier, the story feels like it's written for manchildren, and like what >>83063 said, it also tries to make the story feel deep. While its not impossible to write a story for children with depth and complexity (not like they're incompatible, a lot of old stories already do this, shame about modern media though), it tries to hard to have its cake and eat it too, and it executed things poorly. It has the outline, it has the skeleton, but the meat is rather thin and lacking. >>83063 >Would had been okay if he had just keep the story simple. Your typical hero party defeats the demon lord type of story. >Unfortunately tried to make his story "deep", can't really see how that can be pulled off successfully for these types of games. You can, but it has to be specifically built for that type of serious storytelling The original Shrink 'High did pull it off quite well, the whole premise is the fetish taken seriously (though it still has its fun with the premise). Some Bullshit worked well because it parodies the genre and genuinely has good writing to back it up. Plus, I think aping Some Bullshit is a terrible idea, you should only really do it if you're good at writing in the first place. The only thing worse than a serious game written terribly is a parody written terribly.

>>83117 I think Cause of Concern is a good game for multiple reasons. The most obvious one: Gameplay. Nerds realized that the turn-based RPG maker mode sucks ass and is a chore to play, so he replaced it with something real time that makes you feel like you're doing something. This wasn't necessary when nobody's really playing this for the gameplay, so the fact he made this change speaks volumes. Now, onto the characters. Like I said before, Nerds writes his characters very well, and CfC is no exception. They are all very different from each other and from their "equivalents" in SB, which is necessary when you want to do something new. Our chef is more gentle and quiet than Pro ever was. While Emmie was naive and silly, Mina is aggressively dumb (in a funny way). Luci could be drawn as a parallel to Clara, with both being somewhat detached from the party to then join later, but the similarities end there. Luci is probably my favorite of these new characters, her sidequest has the most creative and funny scenario out of the three and overall she's really cool. Despite being the vore character, I don't care much of Sami. She's introduced the latest into the story and hasn't had much to do before content ran out, but I'm sure that is bound to change in the future. Something Nerds did right, both in SB and CfC, is making the straight man and the main girl have a pre-established relationship. It means the story doesn't have to take its time introducing these people to each other before the plot begins, which allows things to flow more naturally. As for the story itself, the setup is basically identical to SB and Evoria. Main characters' town gets attacked by unknown army and they have to escape, in the meantime they get into stuffing antics. What sets apart CfC from Evoria is execution. The big stuffing scenes tend to happen at the end of quests (unless the quest itself is stuffing-focused) which makes them serve as relief for the somewhat serious moments and avoids Evoria's mistake of every scene feeling the same. Nerds also writes humor much better. I was going to say something about Evoria's sense of humor, but I don't really remember any scenes that were supposed to be comedic. I believe because many of the jokes are "the girls do something gluttonous and are embarassed/people are surprised" which mixes them with the fetish part of the story, which, again, makes it all feel samey. The slimegirl is supposed to make you laugh with her modern and rude way of speaking, but honestly that joke just never lands. CfC is more intentional with its humor. The setup and payoff of the silly kitty joke was made very well, and the punchline from Luci's questline came out of nowhere and was genuinely hilarious. None of these scenes had the fetish inserted into them, and are far more memorable because of it. That's all I've got to say about CfC. It is already shaping up to be great, despite having only a fraction of the content in Evoria. I really forotherpurposes improves his writing for the next game he makes, if he ever makes one.

>>78857 >>78876 >>83117 >Evoria does come off as more infantalize >*babby-tier moralizing >the story feels like it's written for manchildren I stumble upon this on accident when watching an "if cartoon villains were charge for their crimes" clip. One villain they showed from a movie called Paw Patrol looks very similar to Mitzi. Have they taken their inspiration from kids cartoons that are 100% aimed at kids? No wonder the writing of Evoria feels so childish then. Not saying you cannot pay homage to media you grew up with. But are you really going to used something like dora the explore as a template for your writing?

>>83248 >But are you really going to used something like dora the explore as a template for your writing? honestly, it's good if you want to challenge yourself or try to explore something there that wasn't explored in the series, but for dora specifically, she barely has much of a character to begin with. basing a character off diego would make more sense. i just think more people should read more things outside their comfort zone. actually read stuff meant for adults (not kid's stuff made for adults like hazbin, but actual mature stuff made for adults, that isn't just le sex and le swearing and le murdering)

>>83268 >actually read stuff meant for adults Could you give an example? Many adult media can be reddit tier. Usually some kind of how society and government have lied to you in order to keep you docile, passive and easy to manipulate. Life is harsh, its a dog eat dog world, people might be different behind closed doors, etc. Now you should feel very sophisticated and above a dumb normie sheep by knowing this. Sure a steep up from a man-child stories like hazbin. Can still be very pretentious. At least manchild stories are to dumb to fool anyone, even when they try to be present themselves to be deep.

>>83334 the fact that you think adult media are all like that is pretty telling how juvenile media has become. not that there is no place for juvenile stuff in media, it's just rather annoying when every single one of them mostly are, and pretend that they are indeed 'mature' and 'adult'. while i would indeed agree that hazbin isn't for children, i wouldn't really say it's particularly 'mature'. i mean, as a bit of an example, Asimov's Foundation novel series (and most Asimov novels in general) are good books i'd say. could be a bit dry, but it explores several interesting ideas. Tropa de Elite is a pretty good movie, if a bit brutal. It does showcase the brutality of the BOPE and the corruption of the cartels. it's not really so much a matter of snobbery and sophistication so much as realizing that if you want to depict serious stuff without coming off as half-assed, you should actually go read or watch some serious stuff. i mean, it's not like children's media can't depict serious stuff very well, like ATLA or Batman the Animated Series,

>>83503 >the fact that you think adult media are all like that is pretty telling how juvenile media has become If you think about popular adult media like Taxi driver, Joker and Fight club and Deus ex. It's basically those messages. To be fair nothing from those media show something so horrid, complex and explicit that a teen wouldn't be able to comprehend. >it's just rather annoying when every single one of them mostly are, and pretend that they are indeed 'mature' and 'adult'. >if you want to depict serious stuff without coming off as half-assed, you should actually go read or watch some serious stuff. Kind of hard to when most media that market themselves as adult basically are half-assed results. > it's not like children's media can't depict serious stuff very well, like ATLA or Batman the Animated Series This result for the writing would probably had been the best outcome for Evoria. Not to be mean but forotherpurposes doesn't strike me as someone capable of writing anything better than that. I now he already failed, but it sounds like something within his reach.