>>52290
This is one of my favorite pictures of all time, so I was thrilled to see someone do such an in-depth caption for it. I think it's interesting that you decided that picture was the end of the story, while the full story itself is more of a prelude of how each victim got there. Definitely gives it a good bit of variety as to how each victim breaks down and what methods are used on them.
Maybe this is just a weird personal thing but it always grates on my nerves when a story like this spends so much time on the whole "ohh, we have these captives and we want to torture them, but we can't do anything painful, so we must find a method that doesn't not cause pain and leaves no marks, and we have found that method in TICKLING, which seems silly and childish but I think they will find--" etc. etc., it just feels like the writer is trying way too hard to be "serious" about things and I've heard it a hundred times. I GET IT, I am here to fap to victims getting tickle tortured in inhumane ways, I don't need a full paragraph of explaining why they're tickling them rather than electric shocking their genitals or something, the reason is "because the tickle torture is hot". It just feels like everyone copy-pasted the same thing and I have to get through it before I get to the good part. I just wanna skip that, just give me a psychopath who's using their status and power to get their rocks off on captives by making the torture their personal fetish.
Overall, I think it's really good, it has some good variety and really delves into some fun ideas. I kind of wish the Russian woman had more remarks on how big her feet are compared to the rest, but that's a personal desire. The tone just has a weird edgy feel to it that, while it makes sense for the setting, just feels like a teenage boy wrote it and thought it was "epic". I prefer my inhumane torture agents to be more matter of fact about their work, I guess.