lol Vow of Diligence > Ensure more angels are born to help the world.

>>1567 Update, 4 pages now. One new major place to go to.

>>1480 Update Changelog: - 2 new targets and 4 more choices in all other categories - Boons now grow stronger with soul, even if it's at slower rate than skills - Switched Lich Hand effect to level drain - Necromancer has life drain instead of curses - Mana Heart gets 50% mana regen - Blessed Soul requires 3 target picks - Adjusted some target and reward prices - Minor changes and additions to descriptions in many places

Lol, wonder if you can sorta cheat w/ Prepaid and Wish. Example: 1. Wish that the demon lord's core was located next to you = you can break it easily. 2. Another is to teleport the Mary Sue to you then knock her out w/ Bounty Hunter or similar. Now she'd wake up there instead of her bed. 3. Wonder if you can teleport some of the targets into space to kill them. Easy way to kill multiple targets at once for their rewards while saving on wishes. Gives you 11 points, aka 3 more than you needed.

Got an update. >Short-form, unofficial: 4 starting boons rather than 3, options to take boons from gods other than the death god who summoned you (still need at least half from DG), a few new Outworlder targets, an allies section so you can have a small team, and slight tweaks to the rewards to balance out all the other changes.

>>1612 Cyrus bro, I got questions for the girls 1. What are canon heights for the waifus besides Ondella and Bellanova? 2. How open are waifus to say a man with weird fetishes like floor tiles? 3. Is it possible to develop a functioning civilization within the Pocket Dimension?

>>1612 It sucks you had to change some stuff due to whiners on 4chan, this version does look good tho

>>1614 >Heights Well it's reasonable to assume the others are about average height, if I did not specify. But Ammarat and Fiikimi can be whatever height you prefer, as long as they are within feasible human dimensions. Persis might be on the tall side of average, Irina on the short side of average. In True form, Priscilla could make herself pretty tall since she has those tentacles, now that I think of it, but her human half is about average for a woman. >Floor tiles I'm scared but curious as to what this means, lol. But to answer your question generally, I am leaving it up to imagination. Priscilla may be the most submissive among them, but she might do a thing or two with those tentacles. Just a thought off the cuff. Fiikimi might be the one most ready to "experiment", so to speak, since she is basically a humorous and charming ghost. >Pocket Dimension civilization The Writer alludes at the end that (you) won't be alone on the new planet. It's plausible that you can form a civilization >>1615 thank you I realized after thinking about it that it was better to make the narrative text more neutral toward the reader. I didn't change anything about any of the characters, but I'm not making explicitly Christian-only content either

Just did a once over on the original and yours'; seems page 74 was missed when merging them to pg11 Surprised that was the only page missing, and appreciate you merging them.

Someone's probably cut my version from 15 pieces to 26 or so, if you want that version. https://cyoa.allsync.com/s/owWor64yLTngDk3?path=%2FCYOAs%20Genres%2FFantasy%20Based%20CYOAs%2FRise%20of%20the%20Dark%20Lord%20CYOA%20(by%20Lord_of_the_Scumbags)