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An exploration of metaphysical concepts in fiction: consensus reality Scribe 07/28/2021 (Wed) 11:12:19 No. 245 [Reply]
The idea of the nature of all aspects, laws, entities, and phenomena of reality (aka. absolutely everything and everyone in existence) re-writing itself to match with the majority agreement of all the minds of the universe as to what it should be (consciously or unconsciously). This premise is similar to "mage: the ascension" except that it really explores what this premise of the aggregate psychic influence of mental activity over reality itself would mean, it would not just mean changing of phenomena in the present, but in the past or future as well (like if enough minds believe the holohoax happened, then the evidence in the present would change to indicate a past where it did happen, and a time-traveler to this past would end up in an alternative universe where it had occurred as claimed, unless most minds in the present also believed most minds in this past believed that the holohaox wasn't happening, which would cause the time-traveler to show up in a past where it didn't happen, but from a present where the past was changed from the present to make the present as if it had occurred back then, because the past consensus would warp reality to make it so that the holohoax wasn't happening the moment the time-traveler arrived), it would be able to affect itself, like altering what realities people's mental power goes towards, or straight up creating or deleting people with minds that could contribute to determining what the aggregate consensus on reality is, and the strange idea of making an exception for one species, normal humans, as the sole contributors to the "vote" on what their reality is going to be like is rather arbitrary, what if all minds, including those of animals and even aliens, were to have a "vote"? last deviation is the idea of belief being the sole form of mental activity that contributes to the nature of reality, it might be the strongest kind of mental activity, but the mind has all sorts of mental phenomena going on, for example, imagination and fantasy or thought and emotion, if belief has an influence, surely these should as well? The setting is one where the existence of magic means that all minds can warp reality, any kind of mental activity exerts some level of influence upon the nature of existence. The degree of psychic ability that any mental activity has to alter the world depends on various factors, like how complex the mind is, how close the mind is to what it's affecting, the nature of the mental activity itself, the level of consciousness of the mental activity, the strength of that mental activity, and the duration the mental activity occurs over. The strongest kind of influence would be the most complex kind of mind believing with the greatest level of certainty and with the greatest force of will, at the most forefront of it's own consciousness, for the longest period of time, about some phenomena occupying the exact same space as itself, something usually describing the a priori knowledge of a mind about it's own existence. Since the mental activity of every mind exerts some degree of influence over the way things are, multiple minds can be in disagreement with one another, and even one mind can pull existence in multiple conflicting directions at once just by disagreeing with itself, reality can be pulled in multiple directions by the contradictions between the different potential realities that the actual reality is being pulled towards, in this case, the potential reality with the greatest amount of psychic power behind it is the one which becomes the actual reality. In the rare cases of ties, the nature of some phenomena may be equally disputed as being multiple possibilities that are equally backed by psychic power, and in addition to being supported by perfectly equal amounts of psychic energy, these possibilities are backed by more psychic energy than any other, in such cases, the ties are settled by going through the closest minds to the phenomena and whichever possibility being tied for gets the first bit of psychic power that breaks the tie in favor of one of the tied possibilities determines the nature of the contested phenomena, locality matters (also, most of these exceedingly rare events are resolved immediately without ever being noticed). Any aspect of reality can be affected by the influence of mental activity, including the minds of others and the mental activity produced by them, in such cases, the affected minds would influence reality in accordance with their new states, thus the consensus could theoretically affect itself. Since the consensus could create the existence of new minds, or remove existing minds from existence (such as the consensus causing the creation or erasure of people), and the presence or absence of those minds would include the presence or absence of their mental activity, those new minds that are created by the consensus would create a new contributution to it, and those existing minds which are deleted by the consensus would take their contribution with them, in both cases, this would only affect their contributions towards the consensus in the present and going forward, should there be changes made to their past existence by the consensus, their contributions to it in the altered past would only be observable to one who enters this past from the present after the consensus of the past had been retroactively altered, not just by the creation or erasure of minds that existed in the past, but also by the alteration of what way the minds that existed in the past had contributed to the consensus of their time (see below). The consensus can not only affect the present and future state of reality, but also it's past and future states, should the consensus influence the past to have been a certain way, all of reality would warp itself to be consistent with having come from that version of the past, should the consensus influence the future to be a certain way, the future would warp itself to fulfill this prediction. This makes time-travel more like stepping into another world entirely, as going back to a past that the consensus of the present had altered is not going back to the "true" past that existed pre-alteration. Furthermore, if the consensus on the present had altered the consensus of the past, that past consensus would not have any influence on the time-travelers reality before they went back in time, since their minds wouldn't be present to exert any influence on reality, but after doing so, the time-traveler is now in a world where the consensus is different, and therefore reality will warp itself to match with that new consensus, since the time-traveler's influence is going to be easily overpowered by the influence of the minds of everyone else in that version of the past, and if this consensus of the past was created by a consensus of the present, it's possibly a consensus that never created a reality before, thus the time-traveler is trapped in a brand new version of reality without precedent (whether they are aware of this or not). This is because only minds that are active in the present can contribute to determining the nature of reality at any point in time, a mind that has ceased to generate any activity or which has yet to begin doing so does not have it's contributions factored in to the state of reality at the time. A time-traveler going to the future would have the same experience, as the existing consensus of the future, which may or may not have been influenced by the consensus of the present, would overpower the time-traveler and leave them trapped in a reality that is produced by that future consensus, just as with the case of travel to the past, time-travel in this setting is potentially like stepping into an alternate reality, however, normally the time-traveler wouldn't notice since the differences between produced realities would not likely be readily noticeable. Still, history is no longer an exact science in such a setting.
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>>279 Holy fuck two auto success and two extra rerolls. 1d10 = 5 1d10 = 5
>>277 It's been a while since I read the mage core book but that sounds about right. Only as a PC you have a way to cheat a little. To bend temporarily that which is commonly believed into that which only you believe. The greater the disbelief such a thing would generate, or how hard it deviates from the norm of the collective unconsciousness, determines it's difficulty but also the danger. Any time a mage cheats reality in this fashion theres a possibility of failure, and reality snapping back to it's more or less true form. Often in very exciting ways. It is an interesting philosophical concept, but ultimately probably fruitless as it applies to the real world. I would encourage moderation if reading too much into it. And if you wanna play mage then I'm down.
I asked a question on the old /lit/ regarding a sci fi book that features living replicating universes and so far I've gotten stuff that kind of fits the bill but not 100 percent.

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Kurt Vonnegut Scribe 08/10/2021 (Tue) 23:28:29 No. 294 [Reply] >>300>>696
I just finished Slaughterhouse-Five, this was my introduction to Vonnegut and it couldn't have left a better impression on me if it tried. I went into this completely blind and with little to no expectations but left pleasantly surprised. I would love to know what the fact that ending was supposed to convey exactly beyond "war bad". What should I read next?
>>294 (OP) He was anti-war for sure. Of the post world war 1 "oh the inhumanity of man" sort. He's good but that is the overarching theme hes getting at. I'd say offset it with something prowar. Like starship troopers. Not like the movie. Have you read zodiac by Neal Stephenson? He wasn't a cuck when he was starting out so the earlier stuff is good. If you want more vonnegut cat's cradle is popular. For more in the anti-war vein catch-22 is excellent.
>>294 (OP) I personally don't recommend The Sirens of Titan, it was the last one of his I read and it was just too nialistic for me. Cat's cradle was interesting

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Writefag thread Anonymous 01/05/2023 (Thu) 04:27:36 No. 567 [Reply]
Write your stupid stories here so anons can call you a homosexual.
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The fourth time round I had even remembered my name. The pain hadn't gotten any better though. I was afraid to touch my head again lest I find a hole there and touch my own brain, sure as hell felt like it anyway. Sgt. Kirkegaard. No relation. I had a job... A mission. I'm supposed to be doing something, but the darkness has a comfort all it's own, and soon I find myself coming to for the fifth time.
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WHITE POWER
Tanna Banks, just 19 years old, stood at the entrance of an office building. Her newly earned associates degree and education certificates glimmered in her hand, evidence of her successful journey through the public school system. Her hair fell down her back reaching just below her waist, forming loose curls around her face. Her eyes shone emerald green, framed by long lashes. She wore minimal makeup – only a touch of mascara to accentuate her eyes and a hint of blush on her cheeks. She wore more than what was expected from women: A knee length skirt, not an inch shorter. The blouse clung softly to the bra underneath, sheer fabric revealing it as black and lacey. Full coverage! She insisted within herself. Less than a bikini would show. The skirt was made of flowing material that danced around her legs as she moved. She knew what was expected from her but refused to give in to the lechery. Tanna would show them that a woman is made of more than legs. She stepped into the security office at the lady's entrance with a sigh. "Hi there little girl"! Tom the Guardsman said with a greasy leer. "You know I have to make sure you're not carrying anything." Tom was overweight, middle aged, and a boor. He also had the final say over whether Tanna would get to start her second day on the job. "Your purse" he said, holding out a plastic tray. She reluctantly placed it inside. Instead of just looking inside Tom dumped everything onto a table. Lipstick, tissues, wallet, keys, phone, and some tampons spilled out. He took his time picking up each item. He looked up at her with a smirk, "Well aren't we prepared for anything?" Tanna blushed as she felt the heat rise in her cheeks but kept quiet. "Is this your size?" He picked up the tampon. "That's pretty tight" Her blush deepened into a crimson red. Tom laughed. She could feel his gaze on her, and it made her skin crawl. "Now just step onto the platform here so we can run a scan." he commanded. Tanna hesitated, feeling as if she was about to walk into an ambush. But this was work! This was part of being a woman. An adult. She stepped onto the platform, standing still while it started its scan. Tom hit a button before it got up to her knees. "oops!" he said "Looks like the machine broke! This is going to be a manual inspection" Tanna's heart raced as she looked around desperately for someone else but as her eyes landed on the other guard her heart sank. He looked no older than her and he was practically drooling. She swallowed hard, and steeled herself. Tom approached her, "Just gonna pat you down here to make sure nothing is hidden under your clothes" He put his hand on the inside of her knee and slowly moved it up. Tanna closed her eyes tight, trying not to imagine what she knew was happening. Tom's fingers brushed against her inner thigh, lingering a little too long and then cupped her crotch. "Panties?" he said. "Hey Bob, check this out, I think she's hiding something in here!" He motioned to the other guard who eagerly came over. Bob hesitated only a moment before reaching up her skirt. Tanna bit back a whimper as his hand felt under the gusset and wiggled against her sex. "Let me make sure" Bob said, trying to sound as confident as Tom did. He pulled down her panties to her ankles exposing everything. She couldn't hold it in any longer - tears welled up in her eyes. The two guards snickered at her, but continued their search. After an eternity and Tom's hand under her bra they finished and stepped back. "Well you're all clear" said Tom. "You know, this would go faster if we didn't have all those clothes to look through". Tanna stepped down and fixed her clothes, furiously wiping away the tears. She wouldn't let them see how much it hurt. "I'll remember that next time" she replied in a masked voice. And stepped through the door, 15 minutes late her second day on the job.

Mein Kampf -Adolf Hitler Anonymous 04/12/2022 (Tue) 03:40:34 No. 407 [Reply]
Part autobiography, historical treatise, dissertation on goverment and its role in the life of men. And then there's the man's solution to the various issues of the world. His solution is political. This is party platform as much as it is anything. And it is many things. Taken orally while hitler languished in prison, there is a strong stream of consciousness to the chapters. A very good read and highly recommended.
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This is a National Socialist board. Jews not allowed. If your jewish then you will be banned. Go to hell demons. It has open borders, and you love immigration.
>>553 If he was banned for rascism you would have a point. But he was banned for his race. Because I am a racist. And I think all jews need to perish.
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join a youth group they said

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Beginners guide on books about the Jewish Question? Scribe 10/15/2022 (Sat) 06:54:15 No. 561 [Reply] >>566
Someone posted on 4chan lit, a PNG about Beginners Redpilling Guide on the Jewish Question Books but a week ago the thread got deleted. Can anyone here share the png guide here or list of books on the Jewish Question? All I remember from the PNG is the Elders of Zion, the invention of the jewish people and The Ethnic Cleansing of Palestine by Ilan Pappe.
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>>562 its somewhere anon. Everything is somewhere
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funerals >kek

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I recommend you reading this book. Scribe 05/18/2024 (Sat) 16:29:56 No. 666 [Reply]
A novel called '29 Locks' by Nicola Garrard is a very interesting novel. The book is basically about a fifteen-year-old Donald Leroy Samson is the son of an absentee St. Lucian father and a drug-addicted English mother. Growing up in dire poverty in Hackney, East London, his life is shaped by casual violence, gang initiation, drug-dealing, and knife crime. When Donny's bored, rich, white girlfriend Zoe is offered a dubious modeling audition, the couple "borrow" a barge and navigate the 29 locks on the canal system from Hertfordshire down into Kings Cross. When they start out on their journey, the future for both of them looks unpromising, like the fake audition, but as each lock is navigated and conquered, as the waters fall then rise again, their adventure takes on a new dimension. Life will never be the same again. A gritty, urban tale of redemption. It's pretty excellent, and I found it from my school library. Definitely something that you should check out.

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Death Korps of Krieg Anonymous 10/03/2023 (Tue) 04:10:33 No. 650 [Reply]
By steve Lyons. We have two novels and two short stories. Enjoy

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Submit to & Magazine™ Scribe 08/31/2023 (Thu) 07:11:15 No. 643 [Reply]
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>>644 Still better than modern webshit design

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Handwriting General Scribe 07/10/2023 (Mon) 20:15:08 No. 633 [Reply]
To anyone who doesn't just type 24/7, do you have any tips or courses for learning some basic calligraphy and intelligible handwriting? I sadly cannot write for the life of me, and it has become a problem recently as my signatures are barely a step better than crossing over the contracts.
As far as calligraphy goes I've always found it a lot easier to look at it from an artist's perspective. Practicing things like line control, line weight and general balance and uniformity will help you out a lot when it comes to making your writing look nice. Just having general control of your handwriting will put you a grade above most people. There are a ton of printouts and stuff online I'm sure you can find that would help with this. Making it look interest is another part of it, though, and that comes with experimenting and learning from other people's styles. Take a look at some calligraphy or handwriting galleries online and try to replicate what you see. Personally speaking, I've found staying relaxed and less focused on sharp, technical motions but rather soft, fluid motions to help out when signing stuff or writing in cursive/quickly. Learn the proper way to write but let it come to you.

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Young Adult Novels Scribe 07/11/2021 (Sun) 13:44:47 No. 28 [Reply]
The YA genre is wide and full of garbage, but I was young once. :( I read Demonata by Darren Shan It was pretty good, notably better than what I gather is a more well known series, the vampire ones that start with Cirque du Freak. In Demonata you follow different stories in the first several books that all connect to each other, and all involve the demonata, essentially demons. The books don't really depend on each other until after Beck, and then start ramping up the complexity of the overarching story. I liked Cirque du Freak. I'm not sure I'd recommend it. Demonata, though, I would recommend. I think Darren was a more experienced and skilled writer at this point and could really pull off good stuff. I was also a teenager though
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>>616 Someone in one of the GG threads on /v/ mentioned /lit/ not having a lot of activity and as a result I made like 10 posts the other day to help boost activity on the board because I like books and would like to see /lit/ become a top board again. I'm not really sure how the top boards list is calculated but it seems like whenever a board (even one with only a few hundred posts) gets a lot more posts than average in a short span of time, it gets featured.
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>>595 >>592 Oh shit, I remembered it! It was the Vampire Plagues series, I distinctly remember having these three books because they were these colors and looked really similar. One of the few things I remember is they made a distinction between a Vampire and a Lampir (or maybe it was Vampir?) (like a slave, or just someone who's fallen under the control of an actual Vampire) and a quick google search later led me to these through images. Fun read, but pretty run of the mill young adult stuff. Judging by the Wikipedia page apparently there was another trilogy published, but I don't know how much it has to do with the original one.
>>630 Oh shit nice, anon! Man those are hard to find digitally. You may have to check amazon sadly.

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Memorable quotes and passages Scribe 12/11/2021 (Sat) 13:48:04 No. 374 [Reply]
Post here every time you come by a quote you'd like to share. "I swear this to you by the love I hold for you, a love I will still hold even after I leave you dead on this floor." - Paul Muad'Dib
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"I never said we were going home." - Nicholas Ewing Seafort, March 12th 2195
>>544 "But I'm a creep" -Thom Yorke
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In those days there was no king in Israel: every man did that which was right in his own eyes. And in those days shall men seek death, and shall not find it; and shall desire to die, and death shall flee from them.

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Literary Censorship Watch Scribe 03/28/2023 (Tue) 09:33:02 No. 577 [Reply]
I decided to make a thread to catalogue the current wave of literary censorship we are seeing and, I suspect, will continue to ramp up as time goes by. Fortunately, this board is so slow that there's no danger of this thread getting buried. First up are Roald Dahl's children's books. For an in-depth look at just how much was altered from the original text, see the article linked below. >https://archive.is/krLMa These changes stirred up enough outrage that the publisher announced that the original versions of the books would be kept in print after all (for now, anyway). >"The Roald Dahl Classic Collection" from the Penguin imprint will feature the original texts of 17 of Dahl's children's books while the publisher said they would also keep the recently published and separate Roald Dahl books for young readers under the Puffin imprint. The Puffin versions of Dahl's books are meant for younger readers who are new to reading. >https://archive.is/FhlXO The second major news of censorship to break this year was for the James Bond novels. No word yet as to whether any unedited version of the novels will remain in print. >Ian Fleming Publications Ltd, the company that owns the literary rights to the author’s work, commissioned a review by sensitivity readers of the classic texts under its control. >The Telegraph understands that a disclaimer accompanying the reissued texts will read: “This book was written at a time when terms and attitudes which might be considered offensive by modern readers were commonplace. >“A number of updates have been made in this edition, while keeping as close as possible to the original text and the period in which it is set.” >The changes to Fleming’s books result in some depictions of black people being reworked or removed. >https://archive.is/WJy0R The most recent news is that Agatha Christie has had her work subjected to this treatment since 2020.

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They are going to come for everything before the 1960s, and eventually the period of 1960s-2020 Floydism will be seen as "problematic." I wish I was posting here sooner as I could have mentioned pdfdrive.com, now defunct because of the internetarchive case. Internetarchive lost, the woke publishers won. The whole purpose of this was to punish internetarchive for providing copies of old, unreconstructed books. Now that the case is done they can begin the real labor in earnest. Just download every pdf you can find of books you like while you still can.
Wasn't there some recent (like months ago now I think) news about Dr. Seuss books being taken off the shelves and being rewritten for "modern sensibilities?"

Scribe 10/29/2021 (Fri) 10:59:45 No. 354 [Reply]
I miss that guy who would rage and write long red walls of text about George RR Martin being fat and unable to finish a Song of Ice and Fire back in original 8chan. It was a good thread.
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>>602 Damn. I was pretty close. I had never seen your rants before sir. But we think alike as concerns that fat piece of shit. >>603 Yeah. Death before shutdown homie. They can take it from my cold dead hands.
>>602 Amazing, and in that time he still didn't manage to finish his book. I wonder how much longer he's going to blueball everyone like he already has?
>>605 I stand by my troll theory. see above from... 22 months ago shit. Well its still a good theory. He will never release another book.

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Monthly Book Klub Scribe 09/12/2021 (Sun) 03:30:49 No. 333 [Reply]
Hello anons and welcome to the book klub. Here once a month we read a new book, and then talk about it.
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We start with chapter 1. Where else? We hear a most fascinating story >I was there. I was there the day Horus slew the Emperor
>>551 Its alright but the dialogue is a little stilted. Anyway great first chapter.
>>552 your moms a little stilted

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Demon: The Fallen a white wolf RPG Anonymous 08/09/2021 (Mon) 06:30:32 Id: 1ffe9d No. 431 [Reply] [Last]
Okay so I wanna run a demon campaign. Whether we start with one guy and eventually gain more, or instead wind up with a one on one personal experience is whatever to me. Either way sounds good. I have done both, and White wolf makes single player experiences relatively fun and easy. Your character, should you choose to make one and join, will be a Demon, a fallen angel. One of Gods own who turned and rebelled. After an unfathomable time spent in hell you escape. And find yourself in the late nineties. Where God appears to have long left his creation, and there are no angels to be seen. Left with no means of answering the only questions you still had, you turn to a personal philosophy to make life meaningful, and continue on in the possessed body you have stolen. We shall, depending on the backstory of your character, have antagonists, and vices. The monster within is the usual pretext to pretty much every WW gameline. And this is no exception. Morality is tracked quite a bit more than say DnD. Anyway if you are interested drop a post here, and we will see about getting you a corebook, and then walking you through character creation. Afterwards we can have the first session here. This site supports die rolls, and miniatures and graph paper are never really seen during a WW rpg anyway. If for whatever reason we do find them necessary I have backups for that possibility as well.
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Fishing. Liz can hear her stomach growl again for the third time in as many minutes, and her deadbeat dipshit boyfriend is fishing. Not bad enough that he's losing his mind, all that bologna about demons and angels, well that isn't exactly new she corrects herself, he was always talking about God to her for years, but now he's crazier since that last fight. Her stomach growls for the fourth time. She still can't believe he ripped off the only dealer still talking to them, and God only knows what happened to the muscle that came to collect at the apartment, the whole thing is still a blur in her mind, but hell do drugs long enough and that happens. For a minute she was starting to buy his shit. That was probably just the junk talking. Liz hates being ignored, her parents used to do that for years till she left when she was 15. And now here she is once again. In some shitty situation, hungry, thirsty, left in a hot car while someone else does whatever the fuck they want, but what about what she wants? What she wants is in her front right pocket, and she can't stop touching it. Just to make sure she tells herself, just to make sure she didn't just imagine that too, but there it is. A little plastic baggie, one of the hundreds from a backpack. She hears laughter from outside the car. Fucking men. "They always disappoint you" she murmurs to herself. Or maybe it's her mom talking. She said that once Liz thinks. Who knows though? Memory is such a blur. She looks at the clock on the dash, but the cars been off for more than ten minutes and the blank empty dial just stares back at her. "Fuck it," she says aloud as her hand comes out of the pocket with a plastic baggie tight in her grip.
Okay second hiatus time. I'm gonna work on the 50 shades thing through december probably. And im at a wall on this as well. I need to delete the past like three entries and rethink the direction. Otherwise I'm just gonna kill Liz out of annoyance. I think go back to the flight from Vegas even. I wanna finish that story there. With my planned other demon in control of a small organized crime outfit. Office in a casino, all about temptation, we deal with his mooks, finally have a big boss fight for true control of Liz soul (this other demon got there first and pushes H) and then start the cross country journey. Really I think we need to have a book set in Vegas, even if its a short novella, and then with a better grasp on liz characterization move into book two the cross country /pol/lack thing with better established core characters. I mean right now shes kinda a cardboard cutout. And I hate her. So yeah a break from this while I work on the other thing, come back to this with a clearer head, and just a better drive for the whole thing. There's just no tension here. Getting very paint by numbers, bland, boring. Yeah taking a break and when I come back massive rewrites.
At the top of Caesars Palace in Vegas a man sits in an overstuffed armchair. He is in the top suite. But he isn't a man. Hes a devil, and he made a deal a number if years ago for a girls soul. All it took was a bag of dope. He stares into space and sips a clear glass tumbler of whisky. "So... He's back." he whispers to himself.

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Predator: Concrete jungle by Lawrence Watt-Evans Anonymous 08/09/2022 (Tue) 06:26:35 No. 542 [Reply] >>543
Based on the comic book by Mark Verheiden. This was the first licensed predator story following the first film and precedes the sequel. published in 1989 this tells an alternate but very similar predator 2. The major difference is this has Arnold back for round 2 instead of danny glover. and also without any of the concepts from 2 such as the Yautja being a race obsessed with honor and fairness. We are shown a take with the Predators being a very advanced species that has a drunken redneck problem. They dont have nukes to hide tech. They dont give a damn about man. They just wanna fight and are spiteful bastards. What they do care about are trophies and no pred would ever let themselves be made a trophy. This gets fucking insane. A fun read which quickly turns into an X-com prequel. The first of a three part series spanning all the way to 2001. You can see the roots of what will become predator 2 though, a Big city (NY not LA) a Heatwave, Big Willy the voodoo king, no feminist chick detective though, or annoying reporters, or basically all the shit that sucked in the actual sequel. Whats missing? basically the entire ending is completely different with the lore being established in a very different direction. Updates later on the direct sequel Cold War
>>542 (OP) >It says its by Nathan Archer Its a pen name of Lawrence Watt-Evans. not that it matters since hes just writing a treatment of a comic book. Which was written by another guy I already mentioned.

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